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Graffitied heart for jongdaesm

Jan 15, 2017 15:34

For: jongdaesm
Title: Graffitied Heart
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Chen
Rating: PG-13
Length: 4k
Summary: Chanyeol yearns to hear the words that appeared on his wrist nearly six years ago.

( The world is full of possibilities. )

rating: pg-13, 2016, pairing: chen

Comments 7

cairistiona January 16 2017, 00:22:38 UTC

awww this is really cute! i love soulmate aus ♥ especially ones where their first words are known, to make it more obvious ^^

wek9876 January 21 2017, 14:51:06 UTC

Soulmate!au. I loveeee this. :)

lotusk January 23 2017, 09:30:05 UTC

I'm always drawn to soulmate aus and this was just ;;; the idea of the first line your soulmate says to you being etched into your wrist is such a unique one - I loved it! I might have squawked when I read the words "nice save" as they appeared the second time in this fic.

I really love this rich, future world you built - a world where machines are slowly but surely sticking their tendrils into every day existence and edging human beings out bit by little bit.

I felt a little achy for Chanyeol at the beginning of the story. His loneliness and his growing disillusionment were so palpable. I'm so glad he met someone like Jongdae who could bring warmth and laughter into his home and his existence.

This was absolutely lovely ;;; thank you for sharing!

jongdaesm January 25 2017, 03:53:55 UTC

SPPPPPPPOT!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH SO LEMME JUST SAY THAT AND I'M SORRY FOR NOT HAVING COMMENTED EARLIER!!!! I DIDN'T HAVE INTERNET FOR A TIME :( I WILL GIVE A BETTER AND LENGTHIER COMMENT RIGHT AFTER I WAKE UP (I read this as a nice way to end my day).

jongdaesm January 26 2017, 16:00:42 UTC

JKDSJKFJKDSJKJDS i forgot to come back honestly;;;; this fic ,,, it's stuck with me. I was listening to some really melancholic songs as I read it and lemme tell you, it made the pain so much worse.

When i started crying though, that was when Chanyeol said 'I'm yours' and I just broke doWN . he would say that and he'd keep saying it over and over;;;;

you really did everything i hoped for and above with this fic. i'm really luck that you picked it!!!! thank you so much for showing it the love and care that comes across in your words.

i should be able to say more, and believe me; i feel more. i'm just so EMOTIONAL. you did an amazing job!!!!!! once names are revelead i hope we can talk about writing and all of that!

koizoras January 25 2017, 11:30:09 UTC

I really loved this, you told such a rich story in so few words. The beginning felt so melancholic, with the way Chanyeol felt like he was drifting, helping his friends head down their paths while still completely lost himself, but trying to keep busy and hold on to his optimism. The scene where Chanyeol and Jongdae met was perfect! And I love how you framed the soulmate thing as one weight off his shoulders, a spark of brightness that would help him in his ultimate pursuit of happiness. Their relationship just feels so natural and comforting? Thank you so much for writing this!