Saudade (Across from you) [Chapter 2]

[yakuso5u]

Chapter: 2/?

Pairings: YooMin, HoMin (bff), Changmin centric.

Rating: G (warning!: bandfic, includes lawsuit)

Genre: Angst, Romance

Summary: Saudade, it is all that is left of you. How many times I pulled you up, like all the times you pulled me up. Everything we've shared. Now you are gone, and I don’t have a word to express my feelings; it is

Comments

[shinchul303]

Your leading statement - "Changmin missed the darker flash of regret and maybe something more crossing Yoochun’s eyes, and smiled." - pretty much says it all.

But this chapter is LOADED with pure golden angst!

"He just refused to see which ones were meant for him, to see things for what they were...And every time tears and smiles reached him, he made sure to forget."

This is heart-wrenching.

Thanks. I think.

That aside, your writing is very rewarding. The harder I read, the more I get.

[yakuso5u]

I didn't feel it was THAT angsty as I wrote it... which means I'll probably break some hearts later when things get more serious, contrary to what I thought >.<

This being said, I've been wondering for a while... have you ever written anything before? Cos you have a pretty deep analysis of things (style and such) in your comments, and quite a way with words too, if I may say ^^

Thank you for commenting, next update tomorrow!

[gompi]

i am very much in love with this fic.

that is all i can think to say XD

[yakuso5u]

Thank youuuuu XD (the cringing Jae in your icon isn't allowed to be so cute...)

[yakuso5u]

THE HUG. I wished it'd happened irl and I'd been there to watch.... (but that's what fics are for, right? :P)

Next chapter will be up tomorrow! I'm glad you like this, thanks for commenting~ ^^

[n3uromanc3r]

I like the story so far, it's interesting how you're building the story with those parts of the past and present

[yakuso5u]

Hey there!! ♥ Long time no see~(Junsu way XD)

It's quite a challenge to tackle a bandfic but I've all those images of them as a group in mind, I needed a pretext to write it down somewhere and well, YooMin happened... ^^"

I suppose that Changmin indeed suddenly ended up with a lot of responsibilities after the split (irl, I mean)... I've a feeling that it kinda burdened him, but also that the duo couldn't have held on if everything had remained upon Yunho's shoulders only (does it make sense lol?)
I like this about HoMin dynamics, it's quite fascinating even as a bff-only relationship... reaching a new balance of mutual trust and support, finding ways to make it work with just the two of them ^^

Thank you for commenting!! :) I'm glad you like this, next update tomorrow~ ♥

[silentdyn]

Love how you write! This fic is really interesting :) Can't wait for the next chapter~

[yakuso5u]

Thank you!! The next chapter should be here tomorrow ;-)