Saudade (Across from you) [Chapter 2]

Apr 10, 2014 20:48

Chapter: 2/?

Pairings: YooMin, HoMin (bff), Changmin centric.

Rating: G (warning!: bandfic, includes lawsuit)

Genre: Angst, Romance

Summary: Saudade, it is all that is left of you. How many times I pulled you up, like all the times you pulled me up. Everything we've shared. Now you are gone, and I don’t have a word to express my feelings; it is ( Read more... )

homin, tvxq, yoomin, saudade, fanfic

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n3uromanc3r April 11 2014, 15:41:04 UTC
I like the story so far, it's interesting how you're building the story with those parts of the past and present.

The past-scenes with those memories and the colorful and complex group-dynamics were so sweet and enjoyable, I really liked seeing things in Changmin's point of view!

The relationship between HoMin is so heart-warming, the interview-scene with them communicating without words was so amusing!
But how their roles started to reverse now that they are a duo, how Changmin's efforts to look mature went so far that most of the time he feels like Yunho's hyung and the one who shoulders all the responsibilities was somehow a little bit sad - especially after seeing how worried Yunho could make Changmin feel - even if it's completely unintentional...

I'm so curious about Yoochun's side of the present situation, I wonder whether we will see them as trio too...
And I'm also very curious how YooMin will meet again, because I suppose they don't have any contact since the lawsuit.

Thank you for the wonderful new story, I can't wait for the next chapter!

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yakuso5u April 16 2014, 12:28:44 UTC
Hey there!! ♥ Long time no see~(Junsu way XD)

It's quite a challenge to tackle a bandfic but I've all those images of them as a group in mind, I needed a pretext to write it down somewhere and well, YooMin happened... ^^"

I suppose that Changmin indeed suddenly ended up with a lot of responsibilities after the split (irl, I mean)... I've a feeling that it kinda burdened him, but also that the duo couldn't have held on if everything had remained upon Yunho's shoulders only (does it make sense lol?)
I like this about HoMin dynamics, it's quite fascinating even as a bff-only relationship... reaching a new balance of mutual trust and support, finding ways to make it work with just the two of them ^^

Thank you for commenting!! :) I'm glad you like this, next update tomorrow~ ♥

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