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PISSED!!!
this is my critique for a story in class, I'll bold the parts you need to pay attention to.
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KAYLEE THOMAS Nov 18, 2010 10:12 AM
PLEASE RTF!!!! I can open this at school, but it's very frustrating!
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have you ever known someone who exaggerates everything about themselves? I hate it. it makes me want to scream.
today somethings have made me glad
today somethings have made me sad
today somethings made me wish I had
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One aspect of American society that Slavitt views negatively is the materialism. Slavitt saw a great increase of consumerism and materialism when he wrote this poem in [198?]. He detested the way the American society was turning to material goods to find comfort, the way they developed specialized fields to sell items to other citizens, and how ( Read more... ) -
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creative writing poc
"so how are you guys going to handle the check tonight?" The waitress asked as she stopped by the table. I looked up fairly surprised, it didn't seem like we had been at the La Rumba's that long ( Read more... ) -
my brain hurts
through david r. slavitt's poem "titanic", slavitt supports the idea that humans seeking attention is a learned behavior ( Read more... )