Snippets of Time (Part Eleven)

[xsunray]

Title: Snippets of Time
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: YoonSic/ YoonYul/ YulSic/2Ny
Summary: Growing up with you- the things we did, paths we crossed and way we changed.
A/N: Beta credits to jzmasterofall. Hi I'm still alive and so is my beta! Writer's block kinda cleared for now :)

[Why]Part Eleven

“No Tiff,” Jessica rejected Tiffany with another shake of

Comments

anticlimactic to climactic

[anonymous]

this actually broke my heart.. T_T

Re: anticlimactic to climactic

[xsunray]

Aww, bb *hug*

But... YAAAAS IT BROKE YOUR HEART >:) I AM HAPPY NOW! <3

Thanks for reading (and commenting~)

[ext_1229548]

Crying cos one, you took forever and i missed you and secondly, this was a very sad chapter ㅠㅠ

Something to point out thats completely irrelevant, how can jessica hear their conversation when shes inside the car? Without being close enough for yoonyul to notice the sound of the car trololol

Hope those insecurities and writer blocks go away cos you're an awesome writer (:

[xsunray]

Aww *hugs* Sorry for taking 5ever, both beta and I were busy and I really edited the hell outta this hahaha. and sorrynotsorry for the sad chapter! I'm evillll >:)

that is completely relevant, glad you pointed it out! <3 your critiques! I picture it in my head as Jessica popped out the car to find Yoona and stumbled on them, I've to edit it (again! horrors! haha) now that it doesn't seem that obvious.

Awww thanks, I'll try! Idk what's wrong with me recently D: Thanks for reading!

[checkinyourbra]

I'll be back. Major lady cramps todayyyyy :((((

[xsunray]

D: Are you okayyyyy *hugs* (I'm suffering from the same thing ._.)

[checkinyourbra]

First off, my favorite two lines:

“I can’t believe you’ve extended your claws into outer space,”--Hehehehe. Oooh Tiffany. I can see your insecurities all the way from Amurrica. SO JELLY. I'd love to know more about how Sunny feels towards her and I'm hoping it's mutual~~ Yeah, Amber can provide some fun, but I don't see it more serious than that yet.

Jessica was in a class of her own in Yoona’s heart after all. --I declare you keep putting lines like this in your story and I fall harder for YoonSic. <333

[xsunray]

Hahaha Tiffany~ :3 You'll see more of her sooooon and the nature of their relationship!

urrgggg and you're gonna threaten me again ain't you >_> Cherish the moment! Love YoonSic while you can! ...jk jk jk hehe. i just like teasing ya~

Yaaaaas, cut some of that hostility towards Yul, she's a sweet little puppy :333 (but i've seen your comment for the other chapter sigh) you're such a smartypants too! i didn't expect people to actually keep that scene in mind, since it was supposed to be fluffy. You deserves some gay cookies! *hands cookies* (uh huh of course it is. hehe)

Reach, please hahaha. omg i've explained it to you and let me off on this okays >_< Mmmhmmm, it sure did, it added some dimensional to happy little yoongie and it's a good warm up for future insults like you said.

I'll make sure to start hurting you at some point >:))) hehehehee~ Thanks for readingggg and commenting <3

[twilightksy]

Hmm....interesting chapter...though feel like u took forever to update...but i'm glad finally still can read the continuity of their journey...

eniwei...will it be their turn point?? I mean jessi do realized that she m8ght over protective to yoong...but i think it both ways...coz yoong just do the same..though i never read what yoong did to prove my opinion *my gut just tell me so n can u make one????

n pliss dont take too long this time to update...cuz curiosity need to be fulfilled....qeqeqeqeqe...thx u

[xsunray]

Sawwrrry for taking so long, life caught up for both beta and I! I'll try to update more regularly, like weekly basis!

Turning point... Maybe! But for sure it has impacted Jessica knowing all of that including the bullying and stuff. Hahaha Yoona never had the chance to jump out and protect Jessica much (save the first chapter where the boys were teasing jessi) but hmmm maybe it can be an outtake chapter or something if i find it possible!

hahaha glad you like this to want regular updates! I'll try my best <3 thanks for reading!

[parachuterawr]

Hmm. Interesting. I must say, I thought by now, one of them already has feelings for the other but okay, I'm appreciating your pace towards this fic and I see how the dynamics are between these two.

Also, Tiffany and Sunny are really suspicious yet interesting at the same time. I like itttttt. WRITE MOARRRRR

[xsunray]

Helloooo you seem pretty busy recently, hope life's good for you :3

Hahaha ikr, i guess everyone would think that way but I prefer to take it slow for this. It's slice of life after all~ And I'm happy that you don't dislike the relatively slower pace!

YES YES LET ME LOVE YOU. I LURVE IT WHENEVER ANYONE MENTIONS 2NY. I LOVE THEM. And suspicious is my setting for them~ Wow~ happy that you caught it. I WILL. THANKS FOR READING BB!