Snippets of Time (Part Three)

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Title: Snippets of Time
Rating: Pg-13
Pairing: YoonSic
Summary: Growing up with you- the things we did, paths we crossed and way we changed.
A/N: Still need that beta reader, maybe one will drop from the sky?

[water gun battle]
Part ThreeWinter ended early and spring snuck its way into the air

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Spotting here now that I'm fully back into civilization again. <3

Homg homg homggggg. You know reading these are such a treat, right? I loveeeeeee it and their progression as friends is at a nice pace. Jessica went from bored to intrigued to hysterical to embarrassingly happy (omg Sooyoungie moving to the other side of the bench) wonderfully. hehehehehe <3333

And Taeminnie was on her team. Yaaaaaaaaaaayyyy (boooo team Leeteuk). Too bad he went down, but I liked Yoona's win against three. Badass at a young age. B)

Your action sequences were well-written! I was sucked in. ^^

Time for me to spot on your next one. Thanks for the great read~~~

AND CONGRATS AGAIN ON SNAGGIN' A BETA :33333 ♥♥

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Awww, you're too sweet LA! Sooyoungie is so cute in this, even if I do say so myself. hehehe~

Really? OMG, RELIEVED. I felt the scene seemed too drawn out, so happy to hear that from you!

YAAAS. I'm keeping her chained up and feeding her bread crumbs twice a day >:D