The Drive Back Home

[xsunray]

Title: The Drive Back Home
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Yoonsic
Summary: Car Talk
A/N: All the law stuff may not be accurate.

[Where's home?]

The Drive Back HomeWhen Jessica got into the BMW that was waiting for her in the carpark, she immediately felt that something was odd. It wasn’t the half-hearted mumbled greeting or the lazy tone; it was something she couldn’t

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[checkinyourbra]

*SMASHES THROUGH THE WALL LIKE THE KOOLAID GUY.*

YOONSIC? WHAT? I'LL BE BACK.

BISH, I *KNOW* YOU DID NOT MAKE ME SIT HERE AND READ A YOONSIC BREAKUP FIC. Sleep with one eye open. >_>

I'm not thinking rationally rn, so bear with me. This was wonderfully written. After scratching your name (in blood!!) into my DOOMED list, I organized my ~feels~. Gawd I felt like I was in that car with them. Breakups aren't fun and this hit close to home. :'(

Yeesh. And it's over just....being sick of each other, essentially. That's what it boils down to, I suppose. The love ran out.

I liked the lawyer talk in there. Shows how neither one of them wants to back out. They hold onto their stubbornness, don't they?

“And funny,” Yoona shot right back, “because you had ideals of helping the poor and bullied.”
“Fuck this reality then.”--UGhhhhhhh this is so 'adult' in its relevancy. I would have lost my mind.

Man, idk where's home. But I do know where to find you.

Nice update. Keep the posts comin'

[xsunray]

If you must assassinate me, please kill me sexily, i'll be waiting in my bed :shifty:

Breakups are tiring indeed, but it's better than being stuck in an endless cycle of hurting and being hurt.

Don't lose your mind! I still need you and your fics, LA <3
I'm seriously happy that i stirred the emotions in you though~kekekekeke.

I promise you a fluffy Yoonsic someday soon okay (even though i suck at fluff), so delete me from your bloody doomed list!

[kimchi90]

i know i already told you on the phone, baby, but still leaving my comment here :P

you're really good at conveying the emotions of the characters. i could really feel and suffer with them. maybe you're right and i'm a bit of a masochist but i'm a sucker for angst and reading this was a bittersweet enjoyment ;)
your writing style is generally rly nice. :thumbs up:

[checkinyourbra]

Y'all talk on the phone? :shifty:

[kimchi90]

waaaaaaaaat? ooops ._____.
LA, you're supposed to comment ONLY on the fic! hihi

[xsunray]

Well look forward to more angst because... angst is really easier to write for me~ mwahahah.

PS: I spy a gossipy LA.

[parachuterawr]

Awh man like whyyyyy I mean like gahhhhh this was so intense! Surprisingly familiar *cough* maybe I was in the same position too *cough* and yahhhh thanks for sharing this!

[xsunray]

I like intense kekeke. *cough*bad position to be in*cough*
Thanks for showering this fic with love! <3

Ouch.

[anonymous]

So I had this urge to finally read this shot after reading SoT, and I don't know why. It's been like a week since you told me about this story. I was so happy that I didn't think any angst will ruined my mood but no, I was wrong big time. Breakup are not easy, and reading them aren't any easier D: Meh what do I know, I've never been in one. I like how the lawyer talk in here, very adult sophisticated like. In all seriousness, it's beautifully written and I am experiencing all kinds of emotions right now. Well gotta reread that seventh chap of SoT to regain my positive energy. Chao -167

Re: Ouch.

[xsunray]

Oops, I didn't expect this comment haha. Aww man, sorry (not sorry) for breaking your heart, bb. I'm a sadist >:) Anyway I recall you saying that you like angst so... I believe it's all good!

All my Law knowledge stems from John Grisham actually, seems like it was convincing enough! Yay! Thanks for the compliment and for dropping by :)