Drabble: Maybe

[xsunray]

Title: Maybe
Rating: PG
Pairings: Sunny/Krystal
A/N: Because someone said it'd be a good idea to put two of my biases together. Didn't run this through poor overworked beta so the language... may be bad.

[Repeat]

Maybe

Krystal’s eyes dart to the quaint bookstore just across the street, lingers for a second before reflexes took over and had her quickly

Comments

[anonymous]

I am sure your beta isn't a poor and overworked thing. Some people are born to slave for others, you know?

Aww Krystal going out of her way and being all nervous to ‘bump into’ Sunny is cute. (And a little desperate. Or stalker-ish. But still cute so who cares.) The portrayal of her, along with her thoughts and feelings is really good to me. I like that it comes off so naturally, from her jerking her head in all directions to her nodding quickly to her persistence, right up to her anticipating Sunny's response. I feel like I get the scenes, and her, nam sayin'?

And... When Sunny says ‘you can't have me’, it makes me wonder if it's more than a simple ‘I don't like you the way you like me’ sort of thing. (Oh yes, it does sound a bit haughty when taken out of context but Sunny pulled it off alright here I think. I think.)

I might have more to say but halfway through typing this I forgot my thoughts D: Hasta la próxima!

[bobui]

Yes!! Thank you very much for making this Ray! I was actually the anon who asked you this :) Btw I nearly spilled the caramel yogurt I was eating when I saw the notification..

Back to the story, it was really nice to read. Krystal being all shy and nervous around Sunny, too adorable. Though it's an unusual pairing, the chemistry between them was very natural. Absolutely not awkward.

Sunny's last sentence makes me wonder if she sees Krystal just like a little sister, judging by their age difference, and she doesn't like her the way Krystal does. Or she may think Krystal only have a simple crush over her. Nothing important.

But in an other perspective, 'You can't have me' sounds more like a teasing like "Try harder girl and maybe we can try." But the last sentence lets suppose a lot about them. Or maybe I'm too analyzing like always haha.

Thanks for writing this for me. I owe you a sunsica drabble (if you remember) ;)