phosphorian

[xiahzart]

title: phosphorian
pairings: 2min
rating: R
7264 words.
serious!fic, luciverse; minho never loses. taemin loves a challenge.
is that a shinee fic I see here? D: plz don't kill me. more yoosu after this.

Comments

[xiahzart]

thank you so much ♥ I had a little difficulty getting used to their characters, though.

[xiahzart]

♥ hey gurl heeeey. no probs.

thanks! but I think I take 2min too seriously. I should try onkey next, sounds more like my thing to write.

and haha, I know right, that line seems to have been in your head all along before you even read it. I suspect it is because it includes 'jinki' and 'chicken'.

taemin is a thinker, I think.

i'm not ready to handle that as i should be.
I wonder if he is!

[sev2013]

I was so feeling it.. damn..
how do you do that? and you say you're going back your original OTP or sth? how could you? especially after such a story? it's like.. jonghyun saying "we take bath together" [damn tease] but we see nothing afterwards..

IT BURNED ME DAMMIT!

I'm still amazed with how you put your words together.. At first, it was awkward because your style is so different and shines too much compared to others. It sucked me in after a couple of paragraphs and.. I didn't want it to come to an end [like ever.]

NOOOOOW I'm in love with the story, so please excuse me, I'll lay down on my bed and daydream about it <3

[xiahzart]

thank you so much ♥, I've just not written anything for the shinee fandom before and I was afraid my writing style or my characterization would be too off and random to fit in.

so I might just write some more :)

[gilbertyelmudo]

okay, so i definitely did not expect this. actually, i saw your username on the taeminho comm and was all, "huh?" because i remember that you've written some l-o-v-e-ly yoosu fics. and i know those were lovely, but this. this.

this was just so mature. really, that's the best word i can use to describe it. like... it was heavy, yet it was ethereal, and the pacing was very adult (that's my word for "great"), and now i'm left with the urge to pick up a good book or something. this made me think. really.

haha, i'm rambling here. basically, don't doubt your skills--the 2min fandom needs some more great writers much like yourself. :)

[xiahzart]

haha, I can imagine it's weird to see a writer try at a fandom when you only know them from another fandom - the sudden fandom switching had me totally confused, so I wasn't really sure what would come out.

but thank you so much :) I like making people think. maybe I should stick around in this fandom as well.

[blindteddy]

please, don't. stay in this fandom because THIS was awesome in so many ways i can't even explain.
& now i'm thinking a lot and that's not good, but i don't care, because it's the good kind of thinking, not that one that will leave me all tired and angry (and somehow disappointed.) sot this is good. very good.
i feel content and─ yeah, i feel satisfied.
the way you described everything, for me, it was perfect. thank you SO much!

and i was kind of missing this kind of fics, because─ i really need to think sometimes. & 2min seems so perfect and─ i do, i do love to think with them.

[xiahzart]

thank you so much! I'm glad you feel content ;D

I'll see - taking on a new fandom next to my comfortable old ones is such a challenge, but it seems to be going alright so I just might try at it again.