phosphorian

[xiahzart]

title: phosphorian
pairings: 2min
rating: R
7264 words.
serious!fic, luciverse; minho never loses. taemin loves a challenge.
is that a shinee fic I see here? D: plz don't kill me. more yoosu after this.

Comments

[papersanguine]

Wow that was really beautiful. I loved the progression!

[xiahzart]

thank you :D

[sohye_x3ctmh]

These kind of fictions make me think alot , together with them .
I like how the story progressed and how you described them literally 'playing with fire' , and the hyung-whore part xD
Good job ! :D
I want more!

[xiahzart]

:) I like that I seem to get people thinking. not necessarily my original plan, but I guess that's a good thing? thank you so much~ will eventually write more.

[coredapple]

Wow. I feel like a learned something.
But... I am not in the proper state to process any of it. xDD It's too late in the night for my brain to do anything.

This took me a good half hour to read, mainly because I'm a slow reader and I kept losing my place - In both the text, and the story... 8D; Meaning, I couldn't find the line I left off on, or wtf the past day was. Or week. The time-skips had me spinning.

Umm... Otherwise, it was interestingly written. Thanks for that.

It made me feel like I was reading a book! It's been awhile since I've had something like this for a fanfic. :'D If only I could do that in my own writing, lawl.

Maybe if I read it again in the morning...

But anyway.
Thanks again for making my first (complete) 2min fic experience a beautiful one. <3
[Some of the others, I didn't get far with. This one just had me going. I completely forgot about the HORRIFYING word count I saw in the beginning. D:]

So now, after writing a stupidly and unnecessarily long comment, I depart with love.~

[xiahzart]

haha, it's really something to get through, right? I was quite scared it was getting far too lengthy and chaotic, but I think that's just my writing style after all. I can't write too linear, I've noticed.

thank you so much for reading <3 and as your first 2min too, this was my first (to write, I mean) as well!

[taeminty]

I love how you worded everything. This is brilliant. ♥

[xiahzart]

thank you, & also for reading ♥ !

[sev2013]

None of the stories out there is like yours :(
Reading this story for the 4th time <3
plz write more when you find time and inspiration \(^.^)/