Things that Go Bump in the Night [4/5]

[x_saru_x]

Title: Things that Go Bump in the Night [4/5]
Author: moi
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: AU
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter
Disclaimer: SME owns pretty boys and I own words. Talk about unfairness.
Summary: While his eyes are still closed, Kibum's first instinct is to stretch lazily like a satisfied cat. And then, well, he realises he's butt-naked.

Comments

[x_saru_x]

Spot for kyaa_kawaii ♥

[kyaa_kawaii]

♥

I don't even know why, but I seriously lol'd at:
It only takes him a moment to notice the absence of his apartment's keys.
Everything's peachy. 8D Other than that, the first sentence was pretty much an awesome way to begin, the last sentence is just perfect, and all the sentence in between are *forms an O with the fingers* top-notch. (Top-notch certainly sounds funny.) I have to agree with Anne, too. Like sitting on that bench. Stretching out on it. Walking around it. Banging his head against the trees. Practically anything that didn't require money, walking out in public or going back. That's one of my fave parts of this :3

[x_saru_x]

And guess what. I didn't misread any sentences/words this time \O// I feel so proud.
In shock!!1! LMAO but awww, you are good job (Y)

Key confuses me as to how I should react, too XD Sometimes I'm in awe of his awesomeness, some other times I just pity the poor thing lol.

So so happy it made you laugh! ♥♥♥

[xxqod]

OMFG! XD
THEY DID IT! AND!
-flails-
Just imagining... no I'm not doing it XD
ROFL! Kibum! Don't forget your keys!

Minho is evil really xD Disappearing when Kibum needs a spare key.
Gotta love him for that.

Taemin is so cute! >.<

hehe.
Can't wait for the last part! :D
<3 ~~

[x_saru_x]

LOL Key was just shocked, is all. Who wouldn't be absent-minded in such a situation, right? Minho is just helping out... in his own way XDD

Thank you for reading!

[wykedpanda]

oh....you must MUST MUST continue... O____O i'm so hooked on this.... :DDD how did i never see this until now?!?! or maybe i did, and had amnesia and forgot. wtf... T____T

oh, taemin is so bad. worse than Key, if that's even possible! :P and kekeke, key has to go back. oh dear. :DDD

thank you for sharing!

[x_saru_x]

Taemin learned from the best, obviously lol.

Glad you decided to check this out :3
Thanks for reading~

[siaht]

Aw. I wish there were flashbacks from their night together /sadface

But this is too good anyways. I don't want it to end.

[x_saru_x]

Nah, flashbacks are useless when you can have real-time narration. /shameless hint

Thanks for reading ♥

[salted_taiyaki]

Ohhhh my gosh I like this
a lot
so very much. I kept forgetting to comment on your older chapters but believe you me I loved this story ever since I first laid my eyes on the title.

Damn it, this is so good. I love the nearly nonexistent relationship between Jjong and Kibum right now and oh man this. The way he just leaves and tries to act all cool just makes me love Kibum even more. And the last sentence ahhh cliff hanger I need more.

Please, please continue to write more oh gosh. Thanks so much for this *A*

[x_saru_x]

More will come next week :3

So glad you liked it this much, really!
Thank you for reading and dropping a comment♥