Series: KINGDOMS OF THE SWAN
Installment: 2/???
Segment Title: "The Lost"
Timeframe: Post AWE
Pairing: J/E, shades of W/E
Rating: R - strong R for sexual innuendo and some nudity
Word Count: 6,238
Disclaimer: No copyright infringement is intended. All rights belong to Disney, etc.
Acknowledgements: Many, many thanks and squishes are owed to
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Loved this second chapter and how you've captured their frailties and vulnerabilities, especially with each other. Really enjoying this!
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You're my hero. *hugs*
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Awww, you are a hero to me as well! :) You have a real talent for descriptive language - a musical ear, as they say - and I'd be lying if I said I didn't miss your stories.
I really appreciate your support.
*squishes*
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:)
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*sips champagne* Thank you for all of your support and encouragement, love! No worries about commenting - rest is priority, especially after the hectic weekend and the rather hilarious evening.
*snip snip*
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So glad that Elizabeth and Jack read well to you. Poor Lizzie is sleep deprived, half-drunk, and likely in shock from the stress of AWE - add in an exhausted, resurrected, somewhat stunned Jack and you've an interesting behvioral model. I imagine Jack as being just too damn tired and too damn overwhelmed to have the energy to keep up his facades and run all of the games.
"I can well believe Elizabeth, who is as passionate a character as any, to want to ascertain life in its rawest, purest form after the amount of death and destruction she has witnessed."
--- Absolutely. And I think a part of her must be too raw to think of Will while trying to maintain her strong, kingly facade - but Jack is there, warm and human and so like her. He's the only person she's got left, in a sense, and so the connection between them would be amplified.
Thanks so much again, love! :)
*hugs*
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