Series: KINGDOMS OF THE SWAN
Installment: 2/???
Segment Title: "The Lost"
Timeframe: Post AWE
Pairing: J/E, shades of W/E
Rating: R - strong R for sexual innuendo and some nudity
Word Count: 6,238
Disclaimer: No copyright infringement is intended. All rights belong to Disney, etc.
Acknowledgements: Many, many thanks and squishes are owed to
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It is, for both of them - they don't have anything left but each other, and they are miles away from paradise. One hell of a day, and you've drawn their exhaustion and fragility in ashes and smoke. Absolutely lyric writing, your finest.
she sobbed.
For James. For her father in his little boat, and for Will’s stolen youth.
For the Jack she’d lost to the shackles.Another example of your craft - simple words that are so compelling, so evocative - the true resolution of AWE, overshadowed by the film's grandiosity, in just twenty-two heartwrenching words ( ... )
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You build the tension between them so artfully, and allow Elizabeth to show weakness (before Jack, so she must trust him, despite her protests) and show Jack's torment... this is amazingly done and I am VERY sorry it has taken me so very long to give it its due.
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