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Class Assignment: Advance Math/History 101

Aug 11, 2011 04:20

I've never been good at history, and I've never been particularly fond of math, so I decided my best course of action was to take a cross-curriculum course.
Author: rentluver07
Title: The Five Times Josie and Ryan Had Sex, and the One Time They Made Love
Characters/Pairings: Josie/Ryan, mention of Josie/Clive and Ryan/Colin
Rating: NC-17 (Het warning!)
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*clive, #britline, *josie, -rentluver07, rating:nc-17, form:het, #challenge, *ryan, *colin

Comments 5

zuzivlas August 15 2011, 20:20:08 UTC

Oy woman! Why nobody dared to comment on this just yet is beyond me... I shall presume they fainted from the overload of awesome that was this fic ( ... )

rentluver07 August 16 2011, 02:49:33 UTC

Awww, thanks! I was starting to give up on anybody commenting and I was all bummed out. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! This is probably the most satisfied I have been with a one shot it I don't know how long. And you know how great my self-esteem is, so that's saying a lot.

I was really pleased with the flow, too. I was afraid going into it that 5 meaningless fucks would be too much and seem too monotonous, but I went ahead and tried it anyway, and I think it worked really well.

mrsalanadavis August 15 2011, 20:37:39 UTC

I've not read this yet, because I don't read WL fic much these days, but Zuz brought this one to my attention because it's a Ry/Josie one and who am I to not read a story about my OTP? :P

I'll have a wee read at it later and then flail and use my smutty Josie icon and just generally babble incoherently at you and proclaim my love for you for writing this :P

You may have to wait a wee hour or so though ;)

mrsalanadavis August 15 2011, 21:35:35 UTC

Ok, I'll start of with a basic 'HNNNNNNNNG!!!!!!' <3

Oh Sarah! This was perfect! I've been longing for a Ryan/Josie based fic for a long time now! They're my OTP, always have been and always will be, and it upsets me when I realise just how little fic we have about the two of them. And smutty fic about them is even rarer still. But this. This has very much made my day ^__^

Like Zuz above has said, I like how you don't describe the first 5 times they have sex much because it's really just meaningless for Josie, but then for the last one, you describe it in beautiful detail. The one time it had meaning and the one time it was memorable :)

I would go on and on about this story, but you would get tired of my rambling so I shall just leave you now with a 'I Bloody Love You' and 'I Bloody Love This Fic!' :D

Oh woman, my shipper heart is overjoyed! <3<3<3 Please please write more for this pairing in the future *puppy eyes*

rentluver07 August 16 2011, 02:58:19 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much! I've never done Ryan/Josie before (or het, for that matter), but I have always been intrigued by their obvious affection for one another on stage. Plus, I am absolutely in love with Josie (and she's not married. It could happen:P) I wish there were more fics out there with this pairing. I think I'll have to take you up on that entreaty and make that happen.

Like I said above, I knew I wanted to do a BritLine setting for this assignment, but it was surprisingly difficult to settle on a theme. Once I thought of this one, though, it was on! I don't think I even went back and did any revisions or anything. I just proofread it and put it up. I'm really pleased with how it came out.

Thanks for reading and commenting. You make me all warm and fuzzy inside!