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GASP FIRST COMMENTER?!?! zclover March 30 2011, 03:21:32 UTC
this was great!!!!
haha, LOVED the collar bit - both what it says and that it was for the doctor, not Jack.
I like how you explained how both the 9th and 10th doctors were a part of Jack's development, but the 11th was part of his healing.

("what are you, sixteen?" YES. well, actually, i'm twenty, but i loved the question, haha)

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Re: GASP FIRST COMMENTER?!?! gigglinggigi March 30 2011, 04:10:52 UTC
Yes you are.. I've been waiting on pins and needles to see if anyone was going to like this. To see if it was good. . Thank you so much for commenting. I am glad you liked it. Glad that 11 made sense. Because I had that in my head for days.

(And heh.. yep It just seemed like something Nine would ask lol.)

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Re: GASP FIRST COMMENTER?!?! gigglinggigi April 24 2011, 00:03:06 UTC

beachy_geek March 30 2011, 20:46:43 UTC
Very nice twist with the collar, and great voices for the three Docs, their characters came through! Jack's love is so constant, I think he and Eleven would be great together.

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gigglinggigi March 31 2011, 04:06:20 UTC
Thank you very much.

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dshael March 31 2011, 16:24:56 UTC
I like your characters, the way you dig into their heads...

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gigglinggigi March 31 2011, 16:37:37 UTC
That is what I like about writing most. Being able to go into a character's head and see what they are thinking and feeling.

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develish1 March 31 2011, 16:43:12 UTC
didn't see that coming with the collar, nicely done :)

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gigglinggigi March 31 2011, 16:44:07 UTC
Thank you. *smile*

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scifiangel April 11 2011, 18:02:11 UTC
Just read all 5 parts at once. So beautiful! Can't wait for the next part. I read the one with Hart and Ianto before I read this. Is that the last part or will there be more?

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gigglinggigi April 11 2011, 18:04:02 UTC
Ianto and Hart was the last part I'm sorry sweetie, through you never know there might be more. The way this world is going. I do have a tiny bit more but it doesn't fit the prompt. So we'll see. I am so glad you enjoyed this. It makes me so happy.

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gigglinggigi April 11 2011, 18:21:52 UTC
Did you read the letter as well? That's part of the story too.

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scifiangel April 11 2011, 19:11:33 UTC
Yes I did and it was wonderful. That's why I read the one with Heart. Ididn't realize there was stuff in-between.

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