Title: "This is the part where you're supposed to break my heart"
Author: willowwood
Character(s): Jack Hodgins/Angela Montenegro
Rating: PG
Words: 3,970 (You did say these fics had to be over 3,000 words, right Dk? lmao)
Summary: When Angela goes to dinner with her mysterious husband, Jack fears the worst.
Authors Notes: Written for the debut
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And I'm bawling. Like, literally, tears-streaming-down-my-face, can't-catch-my-breath, I-want-to-smack-you-for-ripping-out-my-heart-and-stomping-it-on-the-floor bawling.
That was fucking amazing, Paula.
YOU are fucking amazing, Paula.
When I gave you that prompt, I never imagined that your story would turn out this way, that you would breathe so much life into these two characters, that it was make me freaking cry!
Just... wow.
♥
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P.S What do you think of me posting my stories actually in my journal from now on, instead of always linking to FF.net? think it's better or doesn't make that much of a difference lol? - I enjoyed reading fic in your own journal, but maybe that's just because the header was there to remind me (as if I'd forget *snort*) of who I was reading about. Plus it's easier to do this (comment back and forth about it) in this setting. I'd say go for it, but it's up to you.
which people don't hardly seem to read anyway - I resent that. I read it.
Oh and sorry for making you cry. *hugs* - lol, that's okay. I needed it. :) *hugs back*
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... hmm...I just figured he was *so* wrecked and upset that he totally forgot they're owned by a massive right-wing Christian fundamentalist bloc. ;D
This was sweet and sad. Nice!
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I *wish* it was a joke -- Tom Monaghan, the founder of Domino's, is one of the biggest supporters of the Dominionists (nothing to do with the pizza, just a coincidence), a fundamentalist Christian movement whose members read the Bible literally, believe that God has called them to take over the U.S. Government, and who are working to eliminate public schools.
*shakes head*
Their brooklyn-style pizza rocks. What? Hey, I have conservative friends who don't vote with their pocketbooks, so I have eaten it to be polite -- but I won't pay for it.
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*thinks Dominoes is good pizza*
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Tee hee hee ... purple top and jeans for Angela, eh? ;) ;)
Oh, it's lovely, Will! I love this fic. It's just ... so angsty to start, and then I was literally holding my breath, wondering what the outcome would be. But I never should have doubted you'd give us the wonderful ending you did. Yah Jack and Angela! :D
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Tee hee hee ... purple top and jeans for Angela, eh? ;) ;) - You know I've only just realised that outfit is almost the same kind of thing that Michaela is wearing in that woman's charity photograph me and you were discussing not long ago rotflmao. Not to mention that the colour combo is also the same as what she's got on in that Promo image you gave me off IMDB! *snort*. Although saying that couldn't you just imagine her standing in the doorway in a outfit like that?? Also it makes me lol at the fact that whenever I read this story and I read the bit about his t-shirt ( ... )
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