Oh, I love this. The absolute depth of Jared's grief, only shared a little with Mackenzie, and the shock and disbelief and uneasy joy at Jensen's return. But there had to be some repurcussions from Jensen's ordeal, and I'm glad you didn't have everything return magically to normal just because Jensen was back.
This was really wonderful. Have to say I was expecting Mark to be behind it and not taken along with Jensen so that was a nice surprise. I'm also glad there was no noncon involved as they would have added another whole layer to this and the boys had enough of a struggle finding their way back without that on top of it. Nice job, really drew me in and I devoured every word.
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This was a lovely read. Thank you!
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It was amazing. The raw emotions just leaped out of the page and they hurt.
That's how powerful your writing was to me. I was cheering with, and hurting for, and in love with the characters.
It's still going to be a long road to recovery for them but at least they'll be together. :)
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