Life, Underwater- 6/6

[wastetheyears]

Comments

[ayane42]

i loved this!! the depth of Jared's grief!!! and Jensen!! i didn't see that coming! wonderful wonderful story!!

[ar_richardson]

This was just really well done. Everyone's reactions seemed very genuine, from Jared's grief to his shocked, disbelieving relief that Jensen was alive after all. Definitely a roller-coaster of a ride. Loved it.

[niki_black]

oh man, how I LOVED this fic!
Beautifully written, I cried a little but that was definitely worth it.
Amazing fic!

[plumlush]

So this was a ball of visceral reaction. I kept finding myself wrapped up in my own hug, some sad little self-comfort in a sea of hurt. And every so often a line would catch and my heart would spasm.

I feel like I know your Jared, down to his interior life and hopes and fears, and I want him to be okay and safe forever. For all your careful drawing of Jared as an unreliable barometer of his possessiveness of Jen, I believed every fucking word. This world was too clear not to be real. And your scenario for Jensen was horrifying without feeling gratuitous, and that is what really elevated this for me. You let the boys' separation, and not the depravity, define the trauma. And then you just executed on every level.

You've done a phenomenal fucking job. Really, I could point to a million little things that made this beautiful, but it boils down to: whoa, you are super fucking talented. Thanks for sharing these boys with us.

[2blueshoes]

** wipes eyes** I cried . First time I have cried so early in a fic. My heart broke 3 times , once when he died, then when he came back and things were hard between them and again when Jensen thought they were breaking up. * blows nose* just need to go buy a new box of tissues.