it's been weeks, if not months, since I last read a fic that made me cry like hell. the first part really got to me. if I was Sungmin in THAT world then I'd feel the same; like everything's real. then you wrote about Hae's dad dying (I was so out of myself that my heart was simply sinking in deep puddles.) don't get me started on the days when Sungmin was thinking about university and HyukHae thinking hardly about it and the moment when Hae gave that envelope to Sungmin and the hug and.. my heart reached Milky Way
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I'm not going to lie; all the way through reading your comment I've been grinning like an idiot. I'm so sorry I made you cry! /gives you a whole wad of tissues :(
I'm really interested in psychological fics, manga, stories, movies, uh, all avenues of psychological stories, basically. This was my first time trying to write it myself though, and I'm so glad you like it ;___; One of my favourite scenes ♥ As I mentioned to thundersquall, it's just the contrast between Sungmin believing what's real and Heechul showing him the truth, and then his denial... Ah, the ending! I have to admit it's a bit of a copout imo, but! It's the end...
THank you so much! And I will, um, board my spaceship at the next opportunity to seek your heart through the galaxies! Hopefully I will find it and return it back to you :)
♥ YOU YOU YOU. Thank you for taking the time to comment and leaving such a wonderful comment :)
You and my older sister will get along just fine. Great more even. She likes psychological stories too. She's written a lot and honestly at some point I can't understand this part and I have to read all over again. I'm even more glad that you wrote it. Seriously. ^^ yes yes. now you make me miss Sungmin MOAR. /sniffs
Btw, if you don't mind, may I add you as a friend? Just that.. uhmm... /is stuttering after reading your work, I was really hyped up. But it was a sad fic but it really got the adrenalin kicking! That was helpful just so you know because I was stuck on this KangTeuk am writing right now. Which is a fic that's supposed to be funny/sweet. Ahh.. It's also because I admire your style of writing. Am I still making any sense here? lol. anyway, yeah?
Now I'm curious about your sister and what she writes! Hahaha, but there's nothing wrong with psychological things! It gets you thinking, more than romance or comedy ever could (though I'm a sucker for them anyway...) And I'm so glad you liked it! Seriously :) Why would you miss Sungmin :( He is gorgeous perfection and right there for the taking, om nom nom.
Ahahah, no I don't mind at all! I'll add you on my regular journal :) Lmaoooo, I'm glad it got you hyped up? Well, anything to help a fellow writer! I can understand completely with the -getting stuck on a certain part of a fic- ugh, tell me about it. Worse part of the process, but it makes the end result all the much more rewarding, so keep at it! Thank you! I don't find anything... more than ordinary about my style, tbh, so it's nice to hear that :) I understand you, dw!
omg that was so beautiful ;__; i haven't cried while reading something in a long time. i felt so bad for sungmin. the scene when he introduces hyukjae to heechul, when his world starts to fall apart, and when he buries his dolls... those two scenes were the most heartbreaking for me. his fantasy world seemed so real, so full of details and emotions, and then... too good to be true ;_; poor thing. i can't leave a decent comment, i'm still touched by it lol ;_; i loved the whole psychology involved. it was beautifully written. i'm glad i was up till 6am reading it ♥
i can't leave a decent comment What is this lie? This was a beautiful comment :( I'm so touched you cried, but it wasn't meant to be tear inducing! Sungmin needs to stop being babied (by me) >:/ and grow up! Needs to see the truth! But I know what you mean... We can't have all we want, after all. The scene where Hyukjae meets Heechul is one of my favourites... which probably says a lot about my love for angst, orz.
The article I linked mayawelstead was probably the starting point of this and made me think what if? and now I'm glad I took the leap and you like the psychology behind it! Ngl, the human brain is so fascinating and we continually under estimate it and the mind ;__;
Thank you so much... Though you should probably sleep, cries. 6am? I don't even have school and I mourn at that loss of sleep!
Eee, your icon! Double Sungmin! Sungmin needs to stop being babied! But Hyukjae and Donghae needs to be cuddled for eternity and then some. Thanks for the comment :)
when you open the story bit by bit, it make me glued on my chair and continue reading, the world Sungmin has create is so real that it make me think for once that the real life of him in Goyang is the fake one... you make Hae and Hyuk character so much like they really exist and it make me sad when they're just an imaginary friend of Min... <33333 Mems this up...
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I'm really interested in psychological fics, manga, stories, movies, uh, all avenues of psychological stories, basically. This was my first time trying to write it myself though, and I'm so glad you like it ;___; One of my favourite scenes ♥ As I mentioned to thundersquall, it's just the contrast between Sungmin believing what's real and Heechul showing him the truth, and then his denial...
Ah, the ending! I have to admit it's a bit of a copout imo, but! It's the end...
THank you so much! And I will, um, board my spaceship at the next opportunity to seek your heart through the galaxies! Hopefully I will find it and return it back to you :)
♥ YOU YOU YOU. Thank you for taking the time to comment and leaving such a wonderful comment :)
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You and my older sister will get along just fine. Great more even. She likes psychological stories too. She's written a lot and honestly at some point I can't understand this part and I have to read all over again. I'm even more glad that you wrote it. Seriously. ^^ yes yes. now you make me miss Sungmin MOAR. /sniffs
Btw, if you don't mind, may I add you as a friend? Just that.. uhmm... /is stuttering after reading your work, I was really hyped up. But it was a sad fic but it really got the adrenalin kicking! That was helpful just so you know because I was stuck on this KangTeuk am writing right now. Which is a fic that's supposed to be funny/sweet. Ahh.. It's also because I admire your style of writing. Am I still making any sense here? lol. anyway, yeah?
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Now I'm curious about your sister and what she writes! Hahaha, but there's nothing wrong with psychological things! It gets you thinking, more than romance or comedy ever could (though I'm a sucker for them anyway...) And I'm so glad you liked it! Seriously :)
Why would you miss Sungmin :( He is gorgeous perfection and right there for the taking, om nom nom.
Ahahah, no I don't mind at all! I'll add you on my regular journal :)
Lmaoooo, I'm glad it got you hyped up? Well, anything to help a fellow writer! I can understand completely with the -getting stuck on a certain part of a fic- ugh, tell me about it. Worse part of the process, but it makes the end result all the much more rewarding, so keep at it!
Thank you! I don't find anything... more than ordinary about my style, tbh, so it's nice to hear that :)
I understand you, dw!
/snuggles in a hug. You're so cute and sweet :')
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really well written and captivating :)
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Thank you!
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it was beautifully written. i'm glad i was up till 6am reading it ♥
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What is this lie? This was a beautiful comment :( I'm so touched you cried, but it wasn't meant to be tear inducing! Sungmin needs to stop being babied (by me) >:/ and grow up! Needs to see the truth! But I know what you mean... We can't have all we want, after all.
The scene where Hyukjae meets Heechul is one of my favourites... which probably says a lot about my love for angst, orz.
The article I linked mayawelstead was probably the starting point of this and made me think what if? and now I'm glad I took the leap and you like the psychology behind it! Ngl, the human brain is so fascinating and we continually under estimate it and the mind ;__;
Thank you so much... Though you should probably sleep, cries. 6am? I don't even have school and I mourn at that loss of sleep!
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Sungmin needs to stop being babied! But Hyukjae and Donghae needs to be cuddled for eternity and then some.
Thanks for the comment :)
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Mems this up...
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I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for the kind comment and the mem ♥
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