Brightest (Krystal-centric, Krystal/Luna)

[warmboys]

Pairings: Krystal-centric (Krystal/Luna)
Word Count: ~2400 words
Rating: R
Summary: Krystal packs her bags at eighteen. The only number she keeps in her pocket is Luna's.

Comments

[augmenti]

so i wandered around aimlessly until i found this. i think i'm in love with the way you write, if that doesn't sound stalkerish at all :( which it does, but i'm trying.

She thinks of things she shouldn’t during, beautiful things that don’t belong to her, like a candlewick burning just fingerlengths away but you can never manage to pass your hand through the flame, even if you want to try getting burned just once.

anyways this, i really really love your descriptions, and the way you write in general. luna made me want to sparkle, taemin was quietly awkward, and krystal was just so believable.

i especially loved the last paragraph lkajlkjf♥♥ thanks for sharing! ;;

[warmboys]

That's not stalkerish! A lot of things can sound stalkerish in a (relatively) small fandom like this one, because after a while you get to know a lot of people by name for instance I remember when you were still everkitsune and did miracle recs! :x I'm really happy you liked this, and especially that Krystal was believable. ♥

[augmenti]

that's true! oh my god really because that was so long ago! i-i have to confess that i remember when you were still named after my favorite comic and i would always want to talk to you but i was always to shy, lol yes! sometimes i feel like krystal did, about life being boring and mundane and everything, so it was made all the greater with how relate-able it was.

also, fml, coding fail. :( how many times am i going to mess up ;_;

[warmboys]

LOL LMAO at the formatting of this comment, it's so cute!! like a staircase :3 and aw!! I remember being sad when you deleted your username, because I liked it a lot :( for some reason I think we had this conversation before... o_o don't be shy ;__;

Life is so boring sometimes x_x this is why people write fic lol

<3 lolol it's okay

[spacejunks]

I wish there was more ;__; So I don't know anything about Krystal, but I really, really like the way you've characterized her in your fic. She's more than just the :| face, and above the opinions of people she doesn't know, doesn't care about. But there are people she cares about.

The recognition settled into her like a breeze, that this was what she wanted, and maybe she would’ve done it had her breath not smelled of vomit.
This line stands out to me, and I'm not really sure why.

crying luna/onew i want this to be real omg

So, thanks for writing ;; /pointless comment is pointless

[warmboys]

the more I see her the more I like her XD she looks very childish without makeup.

lol sorry this is so late /o\

[chungmah]

There's something so.. real about this. It's really good. I enjoyed it!

[warmboys]

thanks, that means a lot ♥