Brightest (Krystal-centric, Krystal/Luna)

Aug 25, 2010 03:47

Pairings: Krystal-centric (Krystal/Luna)
Word Count: ~2400 words
Rating: R
Summary: Krystal packs her bags at eighteen. The only number she keeps in her pocket is Luna's.

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f(x): c: sulli, x-over: p: luna/onew, x-over: p: krystal/taemin, f(x): c: krystal, fandom: shinee, fandom: f(x), shinee: c: taemin, f(x): p: krystal/luna, f(x): c: luna

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stanleee August 26 2010, 00:34:02 UTC
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH THIS MADE ME SMILE(: Your writing is brilliance.
/faints

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warmboys August 26 2010, 03:10:39 UTC
You have no idea how much your comment made me smile! ♥

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literrie August 26 2010, 10:04:59 UTC
have lots and lots of hearts for this.
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
your writing is so pretty, thank you for this :D

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warmboys August 26 2010, 15:15:52 UTC
Aw, thanks :3 glad you liked it!

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candidskys August 28 2010, 16:17:35 UTC
i love your writing omg. love love it. seriously &hearts
the way you wrote krystal here was perfect. memming for sure! :')

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pregnantcigar August 28 2010, 23:43:49 UTC
Thanks so much! This comment made my night :)

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katsudono September 1 2010, 13:04:16 UTC
i was like, restraining a smile for the whole thing. how did i not see this before!

the luna bits were my favourite. idk. maybe because she's my bias? /)_(\ but they were adorable, and the onluna! so sweet. /sighs happily.

ngl, the taekry at the end made me smile irl. it was like: oh, so that's what i was waiting for. because for the whole thing, it's sort of like: yeah this is krystal's life, great, ain't it? and then you get luna, and then jessica, and while they're small bumps, they don't rock krystal's resolution to just be distant and just not there. then the taekry. d'awww, why is your taemin so cute!
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

i like how you are writing f(x)! means i don't have to write them to get a fix ♥
(also it looks like i'll need an fx icon, orz.)

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warmboys September 1 2010, 22:54:52 UTC
Priorities, that's how :D Aw you smiled! :0 lmao at you writing f(x) to get a fix hahaha. That doesn't mean you should stop writing them though D:

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jisol September 15 2010, 23:26:45 UTC
i'm so glad i managed to find this, i don't even know how but i'm so glad i stumbled upon your fic~ it's so beautifully written, how it's melodramatic and mutely beautiful. does that even make sense haha. taemin's little cameo was cute, and krystal man...oh krystal..she's so often ..typewritten? typecasted (lols) in fics..as the innocent dongsaeng that gets her heart broken but ..here she's a genuine heroine all on her own.

i lavvvvv this <3

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pregnantcigar September 15 2010, 23:41:01 UTC
here she's a genuine heroine all on her own aww I'm like beaming right now XD I kind of think of Krystal as the rebellious antiheroine for some reason. She's really intriguing *o* So glad you liked this!

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