Comments | wanton_bliss: Absinthe makes the heart grow fonder

wanton_bliss

Absinthe makes the heart grow fonder

Apr 15, 2002 19:58

I had some trouble finding his complex initially, some quirk of how I recorded his driving instructions. I called him on my cellphone and he guided me in from the eleventh floor balcony. In retrospect, I cannot recall how we greeted each other, mostly because I cannot imagine seeing him without sticking my tongue in his mouth.

( But I suppose I am getting ahead of myself. )

v. (ex-friend), boy bund, absinthe, s. (thumbring), a. (friend), sex, my love life, l. (friend)

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greywanderer April 15 2002, 20:45:18 UTC

hee hee. xander's in love.

Hush hush. wanton_bliss April 16 2002, 09:00:15 UTC

Keep it down now.
Voices carry.

gadge April 15 2002, 20:54:37 UTC

It's a little hard for me to think a narrative that ends with two hard-ons deserves an, "Awww..." - but this one does. You've found someone with whom it's easy and comfortable - that's just ... Awwww!

Yeah, I have a sweet and fuzzy spot. It's like a cute button, it gets activated all the time...

It's not the best bit of writing... wanton_bliss April 15 2002, 21:36:17 UTC

... sort of reads like:

"And then...
And then...
And then..."

But that's largely how I remember it: without embellishment, yet still perfect.

you're too critical greywanderer April 15 2002, 21:38:14 UTC

I didn't notice it reading like that.

Re: It's not the best bit of writing... gadge April 15 2002, 21:42:04 UTC

The author always notices the "And then..." more than the reader, I reckon. Something about the timeline - if you keep it straight in your head and on the page, it can stop flowing naturally and seem like a series of disjointed events.

But really? Screw quality of writing. Your enjoyment comes burning through your default dispassion, and it definitely conveyed the sensations of your time together. Just a shame about the three weeks - it's horrible when you connect and then they go.

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MMM... dfrahlic April 16 2002, 07:09:02 UTC

Chinese food and lime-flavored tortilla chips.... makes me want to make out with you too- stinky breath and all.

Your experience has inspired me to write though.

ex_chay844 April 16 2002, 07:48:00 UTC

Yayyy YOU! Just the kind of weekend I'd like (sniffle)..

Sounds like you had fun fun fun, ignoring the horrible hangover part !

(huggle)

*sniffle* eyelid April 16 2002, 08:53:40 UTC

awww.... so sweet!....

me = cheese

Heh. wanton_bliss April 16 2002, 08:59:44 UTC

me = in love?

or eyelid April 16 2002, 09:16:32 UTC

you + S = adorable.

(see, I can do math, even though I'm a lib arts grad)

wait haden April 16 2002, 09:32:19 UTC

until the second date for that...heh heh.
but even i think that sounds genuinely nice.