Comments | waltzmatildah: fic: it started when your eyes rolled back in your head... (Alex/Lexie/Mark)

waltzmatildah

fic: it started when your eyes rolled back in your head... (Alex/Lexie/Mark)

Oct 18, 2010 23:23

Title: It started when your eyes rolled back in your head...
Characters/Pairing: Alex/Mark/Lexie, Alex/Lexie, Alex/Mark, Mark/Lexie (with completely unintentional Alex/Izzie vibe-ing at the end!)
Rating: NC-17 (angsty smut that is not too explicit)
Word Count: 1700
Prompt: From leobrat, Tacoma | Threesome | Fingers
Summary: It started with a surgery. He'd ( Read more... )

character: ga: mark, character: ga: lexie, fic: kink, character: ga: alex, fic: prompt me, character: ga: meredith, fic: one shot, television: grey's anatomy

Comments 48

javiera October 18 2010, 14:07:41 UTC

He thinks he gave up all pretense of control and self assurance the moment the two of them shoved a tube between his ribs and silenced his screams with salt water begging and white cotton gauze. Only recoiled reflexively on the first occasion a pair of tongues locked and traced the pattern of carnage across his chest.

Gah, this killed me. So much! So perfect and raw and desperate, damn.

ovariesofsteel October 18 2010, 15:54:05 UTC

I.am.DYING. of lol at your icon.

javiera October 18 2010, 16:45:33 UTC

Well, my intention with it is to offend and amuse at the same time XD

waltzmatildah October 18 2010, 23:58:50 UTC

Thank you so much!

I was so nervous about this because it's the most explicit (and still not very explicit!) that I've ever managed to be)... so, phew. I am so glad that you liked it!!!

Also, raw and desperate? EXACTLY my intention. Yay!

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lizzy29 October 18 2010, 14:42:31 UTC

Day from hell cant wait to read this later my day jusr got better yay!

waltzmatildah October 18 2010, 23:59:17 UTC

Hee! So glad I could be of assistance!

ovariesofsteel October 18 2010, 15:53:50 UTC

I fucking hate you. HATE HATE.

♥

waltzmatildah October 18 2010, 23:55:02 UTC

But, see... it was all about Mark for Lexie

AND ALL ABOUT IZZIE FOR ALEX!!!

the way it will always be...

Thank you for hating me!!!

ovariesofsteel October 19 2010, 12:46:47 UTC

...............

waltzmatildah October 19 2010, 12:49:33 UTC

I also don't understand ..............

Clearly I am very clueless this evening!

violet1979 October 18 2010, 20:38:08 UTC

OMG, you did it again. My HEART! Destroyed into pieces, as I suffered along with my favorite characters (not to mention, ships) at the hand of your incredibly awesome writing. :) Yeah, they totally are predestined, and fucked up enough, to try and deal with their very special, very threesome brand of PTSD by a sex-for-escape thing. For MONTHS. Desperate physical intimacy that barely glosses over the hurt, instead of any effort at communication, or even healing: sounds exactly like them, as much as I hate to admit it!!!

She'd say she was surprised by the way they barely register her arrival, barely look up, barely take a breath. -- I'm not surprised at all! Ha! And I love that Lexie is so happy they finally get it on without her, after so many threesomes before ;D .... And the next minute, I'm all defensive for Mark! For, isn't it actually ALEX who deliberately hurts the person he suddenly discovered himself to be in a kind of love with, against all intentions?!?!?!

After all, they've both been expecting the end to arrive. An ( ... )

waltzmatildah October 19 2010, 00:11:03 UTC

Argh! Awesome review! THANK YOU! I don't even know how to respond to it adequately!

Desperate physical intimacy that barely glosses over the hurt, instead of any effort at communication, or even healing: THIS! That's exactly what I meant!!! Maybe I should have just said that and prevented everyone having to wade through the 1700 words of extra stuff!

There was no dialogue in this for a reason and that's because, of all the things the three of these characters do to each other constantly, effectively communicate is SO NOT ONE OF THEM!!! (also, I suck at dialogue, so... handy!).

And I love that Lexie is so happy they finally get it on without her, She's happy because it means that she doesn't have to feel like the mediator anymore, like she's not the one holding it all together (even though she still absolutely and completely is! -- she just doesn't know it ( ... )

leobrat October 18 2010, 23:53:53 UTC

Oh. Em. Gee.

How do you do it? How does your brain WORK?

I am so FLOORED at how you do this, even having seen the first parts. Destroy it completely so it can rebuild from scratch. Flipping brilliant.

Lexie is so, so, SO broken. I am so obsessed with her. And I'm so struck at how you write Mark- he's like the gentle one, the soothsayer (the Alex-Whisperer).

I have many more thoughts. I need to digest this and read it again in a couple of hours.

waltzmatildah October 19 2010, 00:17:30 UTC

And I'm so struck at how you write Mark- he's like the gentle one, the soothsayer (the Alex-Whisperer). I'm SO glad you said this because I always worry when I write Mark that it's gonna come across as coloured by my opinions of the character on screen (my opinion of fic Mark is much nicer than my opinion of screen Mark! Haha!).

And I definitely look forward to you 'more thoughts'! And I'm SOOO sorry it took me so long to answer this freaking prompt! HAHA!! I had that very first paragraph written at the time you prompted me, and it's taken me 'til now to get the rest... though, I'm kinda glad I waited because I had so much more material to work with... (not that I necessarily used it, just used the idea of it more, I guess...)