fic: it started when your eyes rolled back in your head... (Alex/Lexie/Mark)

[waltzmatildah]

Title: It started when your eyes rolled back in your head...
Characters/Pairing: Alex/Mark/Lexie, Alex/Lexie, Alex/Mark, Mark/Lexie (with completely unintentional Alex/Izzie vibe-ing at the end!)
Rating: NC-17 (angsty smut that is not too explicit)
Word Count: 1700
Prompt: From leobrat, Tacoma | Threesome | Fingers
Summary: It started with a surgery. He'd

Comments

[javiera]

He thinks he gave up all pretense of control and self assurance the moment the two of them shoved a tube between his ribs and silenced his screams with salt water begging and white cotton gauze. Only recoiled reflexively on the first occasion a pair of tongues locked and traced the pattern of carnage across his chest.

Gah, this killed me. So much! So perfect and raw and desperate, damn.

[ovariesofsteel]

I.am.DYING. of lol at your icon.

[javiera]

Well, my intention with it is to offend and amuse at the same time XD

[waltzmatildah]

Thank you so much!

I was so nervous about this because it's the most explicit (and still not very explicit!) that I've ever managed to be)... so, phew. I am so glad that you liked it!!!

Also, raw and desperate? EXACTLY my intention. Yay!

[javiera]

I think this level of explicit is best. It's about touch and closeness and physical reactions, but before that is about raw emotions, hurt feelings and dysfunctional romance. You go too explicit and it ends up off balance. There's harmony in the writing that's not there in the story itself, I love it for it.