To Be Noticed (1/1)

[wakingnitemarex]

Title: To Be Noticed
Author: wakingnitemarex / hatemetoday_xx
Rating/Warning: NC-17 and dub!con that is possibly closer to some form of sexual assault
Pairing: Cohnstro
Disclaimer: If this isn't fiction, I will cry.
Summary: Jason Castro is the insecure boy who just wants his roommates to like him. Michael and David are the roommates who are just sick enough to take advantage

Comments

[fabbsam]

oh bb, great job. i felt so bad for jason, though i will admit it was hot in a sick way cause just...RAWR. yeah im horrible

love you!

[wakingnitemarex]

Thanks, hun! <3

Mm. Yeah. D: I think I abuse Jason too much. Poor thing. And yeah. I kinda know the feeling. We can be horrible together. xD;

Love you, too! <33

[allowedtobesad]

Hmmm... It was hot, but I'm not sure how much I like it. Something about it feels awkward, unlike your other stories. I don't know if it was the ending, like you stated; it could have been Jason's characterization. Then again, it could have also just been the content. And, as usual, I love your portrayal of David and Michael, and your disclaimer lol.

[wakingnitemarex]

^^; Yeah. I'm not sure how proud I am of this peice. It didn't turn out how I wanted it too, and you're right about it feeling awkward.

I'm glad it wasn't compleatly a disaster, though. ^^; MJ and Cookie save the fic. xD;
Aha. Thanks. I mean it, too. I'd probably be crushed if I found out something like this had happened between them.

Thanks for the feedback <3

[bloody_pickle]

BEST EXCUSE FOR A FORCED BLOW JOB EVER

Jason was born to be abused in fanfiction, it's hot

and thanks for the mention of sex slave Jason XXD that needs to happen

[bloody_pickle]

oh and that was awesome bb

[wakingnitemarex]

Thank you~! :D

[wakingnitemarex]

LOL! I know, right?!

Mmm, he so was. And, yeah, it is hot. Does that make me sick?

and the award for most hot and sexy brain-breaking idea goes to....; bloody_pickle. Seriously. If that idea dwells in my mind for too long...

[aligning_stars]

whoa.

ok it was really good but I know why its awkward. michael. throughout the fic was uncaring and rough but then near the end he was helping david comfort him? I can see david acting how he did tho, but it was mike who's character changed near the end. that's what I think anyway.

also, as odd as it may seem, the ending isn't very awkward to me. this is something I've kind of seen happen to a friend, so maybe that's why I don't find it a stretch that the predator would only do it once, AND the victim would be naive enough to think it was for the best. its some kind of psychological control the predator has over the victim. I'm not sure.

I dunno. I don't think I've ever responded so long before lol. I really liked it. jason's charactarization fit well to me, and david's too actually. just mike I have a problem with. this story really bothered me but its a good thing. I'd rather have a good thinking session about something I read than not. this ones gonna stick in my mind for a while.

<333333 always!!! you're amazing.

[wakingnitemarex]

Hmm. You're probably right there. I didn't even really consider that. >.o; Probably because I'm used to rough but still sweet MJ.
Yeah, you can sort of tell through the whole thing that David's heart isn't really in it, even though he did enjoy it.

Yeah.. I wasn't really sure. Part of my mind was like "sure, that happens to people all the time", but then the rest of me was like "...how could you get over that so quickly? ._." but I also know how easily people can be manipulated in matters like that.

Long comments are always welcome. :]
I'm glad you liked it! :D <3 But I hope it's not a bad bothering. D:

Thank you, bb. <33
and thanks for the feedback, too! <3

[aligning_stars]

gah! i wrote that comment on my phone. its even longer than i thought it was! lmao!!!

i haven't decided if its a good or bad bothering, but i tend to think that if something brings out any kind of emotion in me, that its good. but i really liked it so that's gotta count for something heehee.

<333

[wakingnitemarex]

lol. you and your cell phone. Were you driving, again? ._.

Well, I hope it turns out to be good. ^^;
But that's a good point.

<333

[insanityxspeaks]

Ok, first off:
There's a difference between liking someone, and using someone as a sex slave.
And THAT, my dear Kitty, is why I'm friends with you. XD

I loved it of course and my brain either chose to ignore any possible awkwardness or I just didn't pick up on it 'cause I l-o-v-e-d the whole thing. Innocent/insecure!Jason is the shit. Like I kinda of REALLY wanna go all creepy David on his ass and just kidnap the little guy. He's PRECIOUS. RAWR. Plus it was hott. FORCED BLOW JOBS FTW. ACTUALLY, FORCED ANYTHING FTW. If involving Jason. ;D

[wakingnitemarex]

XDD;
I am glad people are liking that line/idea. <33

Thank you, bb! <333
Mmm. I love when my precious little angels are being all insecure and stuff. *cuddles him*
XD Creepy!David, ftw.

LOL! I agree with this, but must add an ending to seem slightly less horrible.
FORCED BLOW JOBS FTW. ACTUALLY, FORCED ANYTHING FTW. If involving Jason (in fiction).

ilu.<3

[insanityxspeaks]

Um, durrr. Anyone who doesn't want a JASONN SEXX SLAVE needs to be thrown in a wacky shack or somethin',for realzz. ;DD

And yet another reason why we BELONG TOGETHER. <333

HAH baby you keep my creepy in line. LOL. I was gonna add something to that effect, buy my creepo side always wins. Yay. XD

Hee, I love you too.

[wakingnitemarex]

So. Much. Agreement.

xD I'm like.. the innocent!Jason to your Creep!David, or something. ;P

<33