To Be Noticed (1/1)

[wakingnitemarex]

Title: To Be Noticed
Author: wakingnitemarex / hatemetoday_xx
Rating/Warning: NC-17 and dub!con that is possibly closer to some form of sexual assault
Pairing: Cohnstro
Disclaimer: If this isn't fiction, I will cry.
Summary: Jason Castro is the insecure boy who just wants his roommates to like him. Michael and David are the roommates who are just sick enough to take advantage

Comments

[aligning_stars]

whoa.

ok it was really good but I know why its awkward. michael. throughout the fic was uncaring and rough but then near the end he was helping david comfort him? I can see david acting how he did tho, but it was mike who's character changed near the end. that's what I think anyway.

also, as odd as it may seem, the ending isn't very awkward to me. this is something I've kind of seen happen to a friend, so maybe that's why I don't find it a stretch that the predator would only do it once, AND the victim would be naive enough to think it was for the best. its some kind of psychological control the predator has over the victim. I'm not sure.

I dunno. I don't think I've ever responded so long before lol. I really liked it. jason's charactarization fit well to me, and david's too actually. just mike I have a problem with. this story really bothered me but its a good thing. I'd rather have a good thinking session about something I read than not. this ones gonna stick in my mind for a while.

<333333 always!!! you're amazing.

[wakingnitemarex]

Hmm. You're probably right there. I didn't even really consider that. >.o; Probably because I'm used to rough but still sweet MJ.
Yeah, you can sort of tell through the whole thing that David's heart isn't really in it, even though he did enjoy it.

Yeah.. I wasn't really sure. Part of my mind was like "sure, that happens to people all the time", but then the rest of me was like "...how could you get over that so quickly? ._." but I also know how easily people can be manipulated in matters like that.

Long comments are always welcome. :]
I'm glad you liked it! :D <3 But I hope it's not a bad bothering. D:

Thank you, bb. <33
and thanks for the feedback, too! <3

[aligning_stars]

gah! i wrote that comment on my phone. its even longer than i thought it was! lmao!!!

i haven't decided if its a good or bad bothering, but i tend to think that if something brings out any kind of emotion in me, that its good. but i really liked it so that's gotta count for something heehee.

<333

[wakingnitemarex]

lol. you and your cell phone. Were you driving, again? ._.

Well, I hope it turns out to be good. ^^;
But that's a good point.

<333

[aligning_stars]

no i was actually in bed lmao! i was napping and woke up and didn't want to get up to check livejournal. XD told you i'm addicted to technology. heehee.