I used to waste my time dreaming of being alive...21/?

[viktoriavampyr]

I stared at him thoughtfully. “Look, Ryan, even just being at school with you gave me a - well, an insight into your life, I guess. Everybody is always - well, not glaring, but the way they look at you - it’s kinda hard not to notice it if you haven’t been hanging round a person long. They’re all like, he’s new, he hasn’t been around them much,

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[fantasylandx3]

that was not rubbish, that was awesomely awesome. a bit short i agree but that doesn't matter. i know what it's like to get stuck, like, seriously stuck. before this weekend i hadn't written part of my story for at least 3 months, and it hadn't occured to me that i needed to 8-) keep going you're doing great, don't beat yourself up if you get stuck. if you know where the story is going then you go there at your own pace; i love all the little fluffy moments in between all the drama. it's so sweet and it eventually melts in and makes the story seem more realistic, like they aren't just characters they're real people. if you can't write anything else then don't. don't try and finish as fast as possible. i'd wait for you, even if it took you another month to write the next chapter. :)
xxx

[viktoriavampyr]

tysm bb. I hate it though, cause I used to write at night, in this notebook, and then I'd have to start all over again, because I got blocked. it sucks, doesn't it?
you make my day bb. I have no words, even for something as simple as a reassurance.
ily <3333333333333

[marty_rox]

hun, i still love this story just as much as i did right from the beginning :D
your writing still amazes me :)

i loved how we got the joncer POVs this time!!
they are so cute together! (joan, teehee) ♥

the last line.......ogmgommgogmo :O :O :O

can't wait for more hun! ♥ ♥

[viktoriavampyr]

ty bb, ily<3333333

I felt I had to explain some stuff, so y'know...hence, the joncer

hehe....oooooh!!!

I'm sorry hun, but I shan't be posting for a while yet, I'm ill (SWINE FLU nah jj)

[marty_rox]

ILYTOO ♥ ♥

ahh so smart, using other people to explain things ;D

omgshhhhhhhhhhhhh
LUL DONT JOKE ABOUT SWINE FLU
TIS SRS BZNZ LULUL

but omggg, hope you feel better ASAP love!!! ♥ *huggles*

[viktoriavampyr]

ILYM
(how do you do the heart things???)

OINKOFF!
aww thank you bb:)

[safyre993]

YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!!!

At first I was confused because I was so used to it being Ryan's and Brendon's pov....but then I actuallly read it and was like ooooooooooh

Yeah I know, I can be so slow sometimes.......XD

Anyhoo... this chapter is aamazing... you always think your writing sucks, but I guess thats why we're here, to prov you WRONG!

Hmmmmmmm.... wonder who woke up and saw Spence and Jon........

POST SOON!!!!XDXDXDXDXDXD

[viktoriavampyr]

OOOOH!
hehe, roflcopter ty bb *gives a chocolate caramel-filled muffin that for some reason reminds her of Bden although she doesn't know why*
I'll try, bb, you know I will :P

[i_sell_rainbows]

I love, love, love, looove this.. (:
Spencer and Jon, awww !
I've checked in daily to see of you'd updated, and when I finally saw you had, I got so exited ! Yaay !
It's not rubbish at all !? :O Your writing's so good.. *applause*
Uuu, and that last line !!:O
I can't wait for the next chapter !

[viktoriavampyr]

YAY HAPPINESS!!!!
ly bb, I feel happy again :)

[i_sell_rainbows]

Yay, I'm happy I could help.. (:

[viktoriavampyr]

yah ha ha, *forgets to tell*
I shan't update soon, I'm SICK

gah, Swine Flu hahahah