Comments | viktoriavampyr: I used to waste my time dreaming of being alive...21/?

viktoriavampyr

I used to waste my time dreaming of being alive...21/?

Jun 15, 2009 15:36

I stared at him thoughtfully. “Look, Ryan, even just being at school with you gave me a - well, an insight into your life, I guess. Everybody is always - well, not glaring, but the way they look at you - it’s kinda hard not to notice it if you haven’t been hanging round a person long. They’re all like, he’s new, he hasn’t been around them much, ( Read more... )

ryden, joncer

Comments 25

xoneandonlyx June 17 2009, 22:49:24 UTC

aww it was not rubbish, darling.
can't wait for more!

viktoriavampyr June 21 2009, 07:39:28 UTC

more soon hopefully bb!!!

cbnx33 June 18 2009, 00:22:14 UTC

this story is in no way rubbish, and i don't think it can ever be turned into rubbish. and i think jon and spencer are so very cute in this :)

viktoriavampyr June 21 2009, 07:42:23 UTC

really? thank you darl :)))

cbnx33 June 21 2009, 19:43:50 UTC

yes, really. and you're welcome :)

psychoxdreams June 18 2009, 13:56:59 UTC

not rubbish!

i liked that it was from jon/spencer pov this time.
just something different.

this was lovely! :]

lmao joan. JOAN! ahaha <33

viktoriavampyr June 21 2009, 07:45:37 UTC

I wanted to get what they thought across, cuz we haven't heard much about that really :(

ty love :)

haha! had to put that in :)

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viktoriavampyr June 21 2009, 07:46:33 UTC

I WILL BB DON'T WORRY!!!!!!!
<3333333333

alt_3_etf June 20 2009, 21:10:42 UTC

Okay first off, you better start kissing my feet because its just taken me 3 and half hours to read this because my internet kept dieing BUT I STILL CONTINUED!

Second, you are an amazing writer (i think you said in the first chapter it was your first fic too?) well you don't write like that, you write like you've been doing it for a while (:

And finally, I hope you update soon because i'm in love with this, even though it's cliche (cantmakestupidaccent) and totally mushy-cushy teen movie style, it's amazing, so chop chop, or I will talk from England to wherever you live and beat you with some Warbaton's crumpits mk?

:)

viktoriavampyr June 21 2009, 07:36:03 UTC

ewww, feet kissing. sorry, but I wouldn't do that no matter what anyone did...but just this once, I might. MIGHT.

yes, it is my first fic, and idk, maybe I just have a way with words (I'm kind of a grammarfreak)

darling, I totally would've, but I'm sick right now, I won't be going to school tomorrow though so maybe I can start on the next chapter :)
and I'm sorry it's so cliche baby, it IS my first one

You'll have to beat me up across half the world, NZ my dear

(Warbaton's?)crumpets are yummy though :)