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vespaer

Fic: The Chronicle of Perdition

May 20, 2010 13:06

CHAPTER TEN: Grey
Characters: Sylar/Claire
Summary: "And no matter how badly you think you want to die, you know that wound isn't gonna heal unless you've walked a thousand miles in this… perdition."
Rating: R for some language and a little teensy bit of gore Spoilers: Season 4 stuff
( The rhythmical creak of the front porch swing lulled Brother Jacob into calm complacency... )

sylar, heroes, claire

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alerena May 20 2010, 19:13:58 UTC

Well, we all combine in pain after the loss of Heroes. Fortunately for fans, they are people like you. How do you beautifully, "said" - these characters still had SO many more stories to tell ( ... )

vespaer May 20 2010, 19:34:28 UTC

I was really looking forward to writing this chapter - I think it might be my favorite so far too, although there are still parts of ch9 that I dug =D I'm anxious for this weekend though - I'm going out of town ALLLL by myself (putting in a little underwater time, doing some scuba at the lake - the season has started!) so I'll have some time to organize my thoughts and take a look at my mountain of notes and get started on the next chunk of chapters (so far they've kinda taken place in chunks in my own head). Did some brainstorming recently and the plot for this story kinda grew a little ( ... )

alerena May 20 2010, 21:57:50 UTC

One of the great <3 for you!

"mountain of notes" - sounds serious and it can be seen that you stepped up to write a very professionally.

Claire-Peter-Sylar sounds promising. Noah would be angry : ) and I think that you have to find him a deal. According to the rules - I'm busy and I do not think what my daughter is doing with the murderer at the moment! And what can they do? ..... of course, muffins =D Sorry, my imagination bear me a little : )

Do not I take up more space in my logorrhea : )

Have fun and we wait for the next chapter becouse it is worth!
Love

wikkibird May 22 2010, 15:21:02 UTC

Omg, I f'ing love you. The imagery and emotions you create are marvelous! I love that Claire FINALLY saw that Sylar is innocent! I can't wait for the tension to heat up with that! She knows he's innocent, but wants to hate him for it! Well, that's what I want anyways. Bravo! I seriously check Livejournal every day to see if you've updated. LOL

I have to say I like Chuck... it makes me laugh every time. I really don't think that's the reason why Heroes isn't returning. It's morons at NBC!

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countrygirl_914 May 21 2010, 03:22:57 UTC

Great chapter, as always. I loved the last line.

Awww, don't hate on Chuck! I love that show. :(

vespaer May 21 2010, 13:07:16 UTC

Thank you, thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoyed the last line. I stared at the blank page for, like, half an HOUR trying to come up with a way to end the chapter - srsly. So, this makes me very glad =D

And don't hate me, but I just can't stand that show. To be fair, though, in all honesty, originally I just thought it was dumb, but it didn't really impact my life much more than giving me yet another reason to pick on my hubby (YES! I should *like* it for that, right?). I didn't start to vehemently hate it until it got picked up for another season and Heroes didn't. *That's* what really killed it for me =(

I still like *people* who like Chuck, tho - I live with 2 of 'em <3

oddbunny_dreams May 22 2010, 05:39:54 UTC

Score for religious nutters! That's going to be fun/creepy to see play out. Can't wait!

Holy cow, the strip search was so hilariously awkward! Poor Molly will be scared for life anyways and I love that it was Emma who was going to be the adult to take off his pants.

This was very, very nice and I am loving the Sylaire progression. They're like stubborn, arguing, bratty kids; but in an endearing way. *hearts!*

vespaer May 24 2010, 13:51:35 UTC

"They're like stubborn, arguing, bratty kids" They ARE! I picture them as this old, married couple that's stuck with each other for eternity - they bicker constantly, but can't live without each other because it beats the hell out of the alternative. Plus, they're really kinda attached to each other ;-)

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vespaer May 24 2010, 14:09:34 UTC

Truth!!! It was a little ray of sunshine in an otherwise very depressing world right now for Heroes fans *sniff* /sad

Thank you so much! I'm gonna keep this going because I just can't live without it!

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vespaer May 31 2010, 19:55:19 UTC

"these past few days I've read everything nonstop, was amazed from the beginning, am now addicted and I feel like I'm waiting for a new episode to come out right this second. Cause it feels like the series. Cause I'm addicted. You're my hero" Awwwww YAY!!! Thank you so much - I'm SO flattered! This fic has sort of evolved into something on its own from literally completely NOTHING. I had absolutely NO plan - I was just sad from finishing the fic I wrote before this - 'A Far Distant Future' - and needed a rebound to take away the sting. Since then, it's become a rebound to take away the sting of our favorite show getting canceled LOL =D Which is why I suppose it's a bit more like a season 5, I think - it just needed that feel to fill the void. Thank you so much though - rest assured it actually HAS a plot now... even if I haven't quite figured out yet how I'm going to end it ( ... )

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vespaer June 1 2010, 20:34:25 UTC

OMG I think I love you =D Well, if you wanna read something finished in the meantime between chapters, here's the behemoth:
A Far Distant Future - Volume 1
A Far Distant Future - Volume 2

That was plotted, planned, and outlined during July '09 and written over the course of several months spanning Aug 09 through Feb 10, about the time Chronicle got started =D It's definitely a different feel - not so much of a continuation of the series (although it does take place immediately following the finale of Season 3), but a 'what-if' story making a supposition on their lengthy future together, and what impact they may have on it (and each *other* aww yeah sexahtimez <3). I really hope you enjoy it - in some ways I think it was better written than Chronicle, but my opinion on that is starting to change... I dunno. They're just... different =D Apples and oranges =D ( ... )

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