Fic: The Chronicle of Perdition
CHAPTER TEN: Grey
Characters: Sylar/Claire
Summary: "And no matter how badly you think you want to die, you know that wound isn't gonna heal unless you've walked a thousand miles in this… perdition."
Rating: R for some language and a little teensy bit of gore Spoilers: Season 4 stuff
( The rhythmical creak of the front porch swing lulled Brother Jacob into calm complacency... )
It was really great. Definitely my favorite part - so far : )
On one hand, nostalgic and sad on the other so funny.
Gabriel `s" daily "is really depressing and perhaps a little schizophrenic. That part really arouses compassion. ...
Poor Sylar. Action Team Claire-Peter-Emma was so much fun. I wonder what he will do as he found out. Such an invasion of privacy =D
Claire was so stressed. I wonder with whom they will do the most jokes. Because something like this really can not go without comment : )
Besides, the criminal thread is getting more interesting. I wonder what "they" have plans for special. And Gabriel.
Emma i Molly in your release are great. Together with Claire they form ripped trio. They are really smart. :
“That doesn’t mean I didn’t want him to try though. It… it means something to me (..) It’s not right - it just seems like an easy way out. He should be groveling on his knees for me every morning telling me how sorry he is (...). He should live his whole life begging me for forgiveness. He doesn’t get to just… just die. It’s not fair. And (...) …and it feels like murder. Like, if we just leave him like this when we could do something about it… it just feels like we’re no better than he is. And then I feel disgusting”.
Taking into account the previous chapters (with Tracy and Lauren) raises a proposal - Girls rule! And they will certainly help Matt : )
And such a beautiful ending. Sylar’s innocent. Yeah Claire! Give him a chance! Do not worry about others, for him, your opinion is most important!
“And with that she was gone. He held his breath until the last billowing tips of her fluttering gold rounded the corner and disappeared into the grey early morning mist. He thought he might never breathe again for fear of waking up” : ) I can not wait for more.
“The girl was too young to see her first penis… let alone the one attached to the dead body of the man who killed her parents. If she wasn't already scarred for life…” LOL It was just surreal! I love you = D Some of your texts simply knock. And this is one of them.
My respect . You are one of a kind = D and I with pleasure rest my head and come to you =D
Ps. I did not have to be careful so I say: I hate Chack!
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So did the one for the Far Distant Future epilogue I've been planning... it might end up as a mini-volume 3... I had a plot bunny.
Anyhoo, this made me smile as big as your icon: "Action Team Claire-Peter-Emma" Yes, my dear, I think we have a new term. In upcoming chapters, though, there's gonna be 2 different action teams: Claire-Peter-Sylar and back to Noah-Edgar-Mohinder (the fun with these 3 came as a complete surprise, but what an awesome mesh of personalities). I need to figure out what I'm gonna do with Lauren/Tracy, but rest assured they'll be quite busy and a little OC - Virgil - is gonna show back up (in Ch11 actually). Wheee!
"Taking into account the previous chapters (with Tracy and Lauren) raises a proposal - Girls rule!" TRUTH!!!!
"You are one of a kind = D" Pfff YOU'RE one of a kind! Srsly, I love you. No, really, I do. <3
"Ps. I did not have to be careful so I say: I hate Chack!" And now I love you even MORE!
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"mountain of notes" - sounds serious and it can be seen that you stepped up to write a very professionally.
Claire-Peter-Sylar sounds promising. Noah would be angry : ) and I think that you have to find him a deal. According to the rules - I'm busy and I do not think what my daughter is doing with the murderer at the moment! And what can they do? ..... of course, muffins =D Sorry, my imagination bear me a little : )
Do not I take up more space in my logorrhea : )
Have fun and we wait for the next chapter becouse it is worth!
Love
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I have to say I like Chuck... it makes me laugh every time. I really don't think that's the reason why Heroes isn't returning. It's morons at NBC!
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And she DID! Long time comin'! I think there was a nagging suspicion in the back of her mind but she just was too stubborn to believe it. What all of them have failed to realize (and it's something Sylar himself will point out in the next chapter) is that Sylar DID die - years ago, for him anyway. He HAS been dead. No one, including himself, is really sure who he is now, but he wants a chance to find out. And... Claire will come to really like this guy. Eventually she'll stop doing so much reading and will start doing a lot more asking questions and listening. There's a budding relationship here, a growing attachment, and a realization that (especially since she thought she almost lost him) they actually do mean something very important to one another.
Wheee I love this pair... and DAMN I wish we could have more of it... perhaps we will get our series wrap-up 2-hour event thingie they've been talking about.
Guh, I'm still so sad...
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