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Fic: The Chronicle of Perdition

May 20, 2010 13:06

CHAPTER TEN: Grey
Characters: Sylar/Claire
Summary: "And no matter how badly you think you want to die, you know that wound isn't gonna heal unless you've walked a thousand miles in this… perdition."
Rating: R for some language and a little teensy bit of gore Spoilers: Season 4 stuff
( The rhythmical creak of the front porch swing lulled Brother Jacob into calm complacency... )

sylar, heroes, claire

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alerena May 20 2010, 19:13:58 UTC

Well, we all combine in pain after the loss of Heroes. Fortunately for fans, they are people like you. How do you beautifully, "said" - these characters still had SO many more stories to tell ( ... )

vespaer May 20 2010, 19:34:28 UTC

I was really looking forward to writing this chapter - I think it might be my favorite so far too, although there are still parts of ch9 that I dug =D I'm anxious for this weekend though - I'm going out of town ALLLL by myself (putting in a little underwater time, doing some scuba at the lake - the season has started!) so I'll have some time to organize my thoughts and take a look at my mountain of notes and get started on the next chunk of chapters (so far they've kinda taken place in chunks in my own head). Did some brainstorming recently and the plot for this story kinda grew a little ( ... )

alerena May 20 2010, 21:57:50 UTC

One of the great <3 for you!

"mountain of notes" - sounds serious and it can be seen that you stepped up to write a very professionally.

Claire-Peter-Sylar sounds promising. Noah would be angry : ) and I think that you have to find him a deal. According to the rules - I'm busy and I do not think what my daughter is doing with the murderer at the moment! And what can they do? ..... of course, muffins =D Sorry, my imagination bear me a little : )

Do not I take up more space in my logorrhea : )

Have fun and we wait for the next chapter becouse it is worth!
Love

wikkibird May 22 2010, 15:21:02 UTC

Omg, I f'ing love you. The imagery and emotions you create are marvelous! I love that Claire FINALLY saw that Sylar is innocent! I can't wait for the tension to heat up with that! She knows he's innocent, but wants to hate him for it! Well, that's what I want anyways. Bravo! I seriously check Livejournal every day to see if you've updated. LOL

I have to say I like Chuck... it makes me laugh every time. I really don't think that's the reason why Heroes isn't returning. It's morons at NBC!

vespaer May 24 2010, 14:06:26 UTC

"Omg, I f'ing love you." OMG I f-ing love you TOO!!! <3 This community is such a giant love-fest - it's the best place on earth <3 ( ... )

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