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Back Store Romance

Feb 18, 2014 02:24

Taemin/Minho
PG-13, Romance

★ There was more than one reason Taemin liked his summer job. Now if only one of these reasons could like him back.

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pairing: minho/taemin

Comments 14

lily_ina February 18 2014, 07:30:32 UTC

Spot for xxgingerchanxxx!! So sorry I take forever to reply/post lately!!

xxgingerchanxxx February 20 2014, 08:52:40 UTC

OH MY BUDDHA. OH MY BUDDHA. PLEASE GIVE ME A MOMENT TO BREATHE BECAUSE I JUST HAVE THE DORKIEST SMILE ON MY FACE RIGHT NOW. I CAN'T BREATHE. AIR. I NEED AIR. WHAT IS AIR?

There were a few typos that I saw - thought you'd like to know :3

Taemin rolled his eyes, stopping to look at Jonghyun with the most exasperated expression he could muster. “Trying to set Minho and I up,”
It should be Minho and me :3 (sorry this is just one of my pet peeves. I gave a teacher a lecture about me and I the other day orz)

... he led the way to the corner where they could eat in piece.
Wrong piece - it should be peace :D

ANYWAYS, JUST IGNORING THOSE TWO MINOR TYPOS. OH GOD. YOU CAN ALREADY TELL HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS FIC BECAUSE JFC, I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE TAEMIN. HE'S NOT ALL GIRLY AND PATHETIC AND ACTUALLY HAS AN OUNCE OF MASCULINITY IN HIM.

Jonghyun, this is why you are my bias. You stupid bastard, you <3 ( ... )

lily_ina February 20 2014, 19:33:40 UTC

Oooh! Thank you, I corrected the things! I know the rule about "Minho and me/I", but I remember thinking "In French it would be Minho et moi. Moi is too close to me, so it's probably wrong." I don't know why I suddenly thought about it that way. I did write that part at like 3am or something, so I'm going to blame it on that, hehe.

Thank you >///< you're so good at commenting, I'll try to learn and get better at commenting, I promise! >_<

NC17 would be a violation of theater rules but it would be kinda hot *blushes* And oh cat ears, I wouldn't be able to pull off a fic like that, but ooooh cat ears ( ... )

lily_ina February 20 2014, 19:45:03 UTC

OH! And for the pokemon trading, I don't know what the time difference between us is. I'm in the New York time zone!

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bluefashionista February 20 2014, 04:22:34 UTC

Love it.. <3

lily_ina February 20 2014, 16:20:24 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it! :D

princessliette February 23 2014, 09:39:53 UTC

Awwww it was verryyyy cute xD

lily_ina February 25 2014, 05:50:18 UTC

Thank you! ^^

jimenyam April 25 2014, 13:03:46 UTC

oh god I can't
I freaking loved it aljksdnaldkas
Jonghyun is so stupid omg xddddddd
and 2min just ajdsknaskdas I just asdlkdasdas
can't
I'm smiling like an idiot right now xd

lily_ina April 26 2014, 00:25:00 UTC

THANK YOU! I'm so glad you liked it~ :D

Your comment made me smile like an idiot, so I guess we're even now :3

hiloser04 March 8 2015, 07:04:52 UTC

I'm not a 2min fan. But this was really cute. You did a good job. It was really sweet.
Thanks for sharing