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[lily_ina]

Taemin/Minho
PG-13, Romance

★ There was more than one reason Taemin liked his summer job. Now if only one of these reasons could like him back.

Comments

[xxgingerchanxxx]

OH MY BUDDHA. OH MY BUDDHA. PLEASE GIVE ME A MOMENT TO BREATHE BECAUSE I JUST HAVE THE DORKIEST SMILE ON MY FACE RIGHT NOW. I CAN'T BREATHE. AIR. I NEED AIR. WHAT IS AIR?

There were a few typos that I saw - thought you'd like to know :3

Taemin rolled his eyes, stopping to look at Jonghyun with the most exasperated expression he could muster. “Trying to set Minho and I up,”
It should be Minho and me :3 (sorry this is just one of my pet peeves. I gave a teacher a lecture about me and I the other day orz)

... he led the way to the corner where they could eat in piece.
Wrong piece - it should be peace :D

ANYWAYS, JUST IGNORING THOSE TWO MINOR TYPOS. OH GOD. YOU CAN ALREADY TELL HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS FIC BECAUSE JFC, I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE TAEMIN. HE'S NOT ALL GIRLY AND PATHETIC AND ACTUALLY HAS AN OUNCE OF MASCULINITY IN HIM.

Jonghyun, this is why you are my bias. You stupid bastard, you <3

And wow, Minho, your modesty is overwhelming. I have never met someone as down to earth as you *sarcasm* xDDD Why do I get the feeling that the real Minho is exactly like this lololol

Minho wouldn’t have kept it so PG and would have cranked it up to PG-13
You mean NC17 ;D

Minho lives with his grandma #loser #theguywhoendsupinthebasement #andliveswithcats #foreveralone #jkhehasTaemin #he'llprobablymakeTaeminwearcatears #andatail #Minhoandhisweirdfetishes #controlyourselfChoi xDDD You need to make a sequel with the cat ears jk don't listen to me I have to write a newspaper article and my head is in blistering pain

I AM JUST LAUGHING SO HARD AT THE FACT THAT HE DRIVES HIS GRANDMA'S CAR. MAKIN' MY WAY DOWNTOWN. GOD, THE MILEAGE ON THIS CAR. OH GOD, THE CAR WON'T WORK NOW. //SCREAMING

I love how he invites Taemin over to his grandma's house. Is this what turns you on, Choi? Getting it on on your grandma's bed? "Two generations have had sex on this bed - now it's my turn" Please ignore me

And those misunderstandings - oh god. CHOI THIS IS WHY YOU CLEAR THE SITUATION DON'T MAKE ME HUNT YOU DOWN WITH A BAT.

Do I spy ninja!Jongyu or am I just being weird? Onew <3

Anyways, I was totally listening to Here in Your Arms by Hellogoodbye (I would put in a link but then my comment would get blocked - you should totally change that so I can send you links xD) while reading this and I think you should try it because it fits so great with this story q_q I WAS GETTING ALL FEELSY :3

A+ WORK AND I'M SURE YOUR INTERVIEW WENT GREAT AND YOU'RE JUST BEING PARANOID. THEY WOULD BE MENTAL TO NOT HIRE A PERFECT PERSON LIKE YOU <3

I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE. GIVE ME YOUR SKILLS.

[lily_ina]

Oooh! Thank you, I corrected the things! I know the rule about "Minho and me/I", but I remember thinking "In French it would be Minho et moi. Moi is too close to me, so it's probably wrong." I don't know why I suddenly thought about it that way. I did write that part at like 3am or something, so I'm going to blame it on that, hehe.

Thank you >///< you're so good at commenting, I'll try to learn and get better at commenting, I promise! >_<

NC17 would be a violation of theater rules but it would be kinda hot *blushes* And oh cat ears, I wouldn't be able to pull off a fic like that, but ooooh cat ears!

Hahahahahaha, I love how much you got from Minho living at his grandmother's house, my thought process didn't go as far but I love it!

No Jongyu was intended, I just wanted someone to hit Jonghyun, but you can believe whatever you want~

NO WAY! I listened to the acoustic version of Here in Your Arms at some point while writing this fic!! (I have no idea where the settings for links in comments are! D:)

Awww, thank you but I'm so not perfect! I do hope I'm being paranoid but I was too nervous, I would not hire myself! But it's okay I have so many other plans in mind if that doesn't work!

Thank you, but your skills are much greater than mine!

THANK YOU FOR YOUR AMAZING COMMENT >////<

[lily_ina]

OH! And for the pokemon trading, I don't know what the time difference between us is. I'm in the New York time zone!

[xxgingerchanxxx]

Totally not sure if you know about this rule because I'm not sure how they teach English in Canada, but down here, to be able to figure out if it's 'me' or 'I' you take the other subject out. For example: "Stop trying to set me up" vs "Stop trying to set I up." The first one is correct, right? So then you just put the other subject in with it: "Stop trying to set Minho and me up." :] Just a nifty trick that has saved my ass so many times xD Anything after 1am allows all the excuses in the world.

IT'S OKAY. JUST THE FACT THAT YOU READ MY STUFF AND LIKE THEM IS GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME <3 DON'T FORCE YOURSELF XDDD

jfc, I could think up much more but I had to keep it NC17 xD

JONGYU IS SO KALSHGLKH I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY ABOUT THAT COUPLE. HOLD ME.

THAT IS SO WEIRD. OMG. GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE THAT'S ALL I'M GOING TO SAY XDDD I didn't even know there was an acoustic version O_O I shall look it up

YOUR SKILLS ARE BETTERRRRRRRRRRRRRR

I SHALL ALWAYS COMMENT FOR YOU BB.

I'm in the California region. Ugh, I'm sick rn, but I'll look up a clock for us after that. I believe you're three hours ahead of me though.

[lily_ina]

Thanks for the reminder, but yeah I know about that rule and about that trick to figure out the right way to say it, but whenever I'm in translator-mode I see false friends and calques everywhere and that pretty much makes me doubt everything I know. I'm sorry in advance, it's bound to happen again hehehehe ^^''

HAHAHA! I wrote a jongyu fic AGES ago! I wonder if it's still on my journal, I might have deleted it..hmm...

I saw the acoustic version on tumblr long ago and have it on my computer ever since :3 It's really calm and nice! ^w^

THANK YOU AGAIN!!

Oh I'm sorry! I hope you feel better soon! Take all the time you need!

If you're in the same time zone as Vancouver then yep, it's 3 hours! ^^