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Back Store Romance

Feb 18, 2014 02:24

Taemin/Minho
PG-13, Romance

★ There was more than one reason Taemin liked his summer job. Now if only one of these reasons could like him back.

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pairing: minho/taemin

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lily_ina February 18 2014, 07:30:32 UTC

Spot for xxgingerchanxxx!! So sorry I take forever to reply/post lately!!

xxgingerchanxxx February 20 2014, 08:52:40 UTC

OH MY BUDDHA. OH MY BUDDHA. PLEASE GIVE ME A MOMENT TO BREATHE BECAUSE I JUST HAVE THE DORKIEST SMILE ON MY FACE RIGHT NOW. I CAN'T BREATHE. AIR. I NEED AIR. WHAT IS AIR?

There were a few typos that I saw - thought you'd like to know :3

Taemin rolled his eyes, stopping to look at Jonghyun with the most exasperated expression he could muster. “Trying to set Minho and I up,”
It should be Minho and me :3 (sorry this is just one of my pet peeves. I gave a teacher a lecture about me and I the other day orz)

... he led the way to the corner where they could eat in piece.
Wrong piece - it should be peace :D

ANYWAYS, JUST IGNORING THOSE TWO MINOR TYPOS. OH GOD. YOU CAN ALREADY TELL HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS FIC BECAUSE JFC, I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE TAEMIN. HE'S NOT ALL GIRLY AND PATHETIC AND ACTUALLY HAS AN OUNCE OF MASCULINITY IN HIM.

Jonghyun, this is why you are my bias. You stupid bastard, you <3 ( ... )

lily_ina February 20 2014, 19:33:40 UTC

Oooh! Thank you, I corrected the things! I know the rule about "Minho and me/I", but I remember thinking "In French it would be Minho et moi. Moi is too close to me, so it's probably wrong." I don't know why I suddenly thought about it that way. I did write that part at like 3am or something, so I'm going to blame it on that, hehe.

Thank you >///< you're so good at commenting, I'll try to learn and get better at commenting, I promise! >_<

NC17 would be a violation of theater rules but it would be kinda hot *blushes* And oh cat ears, I wouldn't be able to pull off a fic like that, but ooooh cat ears ( ... )

lily_ina February 20 2014, 19:45:03 UTC

OH! And for the pokemon trading, I don't know what the time difference between us is. I'm in the New York time zone!

xxgingerchanxxx February 23 2014, 08:25:41 UTC

Totally not sure if you know about this rule because I'm not sure how they teach English in Canada, but down here, to be able to figure out if it's 'me' or 'I' you take the other subject out. For example: "Stop trying to set me up" vs "Stop trying to set I up." The first one is correct, right? So then you just put the other subject in with it: "Stop trying to set Minho and me up." :] Just a nifty trick that has saved my ass so many times xD Anything after 1am allows all the excuses in the world.

IT'S OKAY. JUST THE FACT THAT YOU READ MY STUFF AND LIKE THEM IS GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME <3 DON'T FORCE YOURSELF XDDD ( ... )

lily_ina February 25 2014, 05:39:04 UTC

Thanks for the reminder, but yeah I know about that rule and about that trick to figure out the right way to say it, but whenever I'm in translator-mode I see false friends and calques everywhere and that pretty much makes me doubt everything I know. I'm sorry in advance, it's bound to happen again hehehehe ^^''

HAHAHA! I wrote a jongyu fic AGES ago! I wonder if it's still on my journal, I might have deleted it..hmm...

I saw the acoustic version on tumblr long ago and have it on my computer ever since :3 It's really calm and nice! ^w^

THANK YOU AGAIN!!

Oh I'm sorry! I hope you feel better soon! Take all the time you need!

If you're in the same time zone as Vancouver then yep, it's 3 hours! ^^

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