Comments | velvet_mace: PETS Chapter 9

velvet_mace

PETS Chapter 9

Aug 15, 2005 15:03

Unbeta'd. Rough. This chapter is something of a let down from last one's hotness. I suppose that's just the way fics work. Call this the post orgasmic glow. This is a plot chapter, introducing a lot of new (canon) characters into the mix. And I've done what I've never done before. Written consensual canon sex. Amazing. Enjoy it because it ( Read more... )

fma, fma: gracia, fma: hughes, rated: nc-17, fic, pets

Comments 59

cephiedvariable August 18 2005, 06:25:45 UTC

I love the way you write Hughes. I do believe I've already mentioned that- quite profusely, in fact. ^___^ But the scene where he came into the Hotel room at night... and Gracia has left a space for him on the bed- that was beautiful. ^___^

Bradley's smile widened. "That's what I'd heard. My, my what a naughty sin."

Ahahahaha. That's so funny because WE all know that the Fuhrer is Pride, but Hughes has no idea. Ohohoho, sometimes it is great indeed to be the audience!

kaibunnee August 20 2005, 01:52:18 UTC

*tosses hat into the air* Yesh! That was fast. Merff. Off to read.

tromkehra August 20 2005, 06:04:35 UTC

that was sweet to give hughes some time with his lovely wife X3! Also yay for straight smut XD! It just wouldn't be as exciting with out a male and female getting it on. I think it's the idea that some girls can replace themselves with the female XD!

mija711 August 21 2005, 11:56:12 UTC

omg I have just spent hours reading this fic from chapter one..and it was well worth it...I had not noticed that you were the one who had written pawns or I would have read this sooner, I usually shy away from fics with the sins in pairings or dominant roles, what can I say , it aint my cup of tea, lol but your totally changing my mind on that one, this story is fantastic! and Ive only seen Greed in Episode with Lab 5, but have yet to see the others, well except for Gluttony, Lust, and Envy, and bits of sloth..again this fic totally blew me away, and I find it cute how you are competing with Sky Dark on word count, funny cause you and Skydark are like my favorite authors, both your works are totally wonderful, well written and gut clenching, that nail biting way that you guys have of putting me on edge till the next chapter is up..I was like that with Pawns and Sex-Ed Teacher and now with Pets..lol..yall are thee best..again Velvet you truelly seem to bring charactors to life in a way that it doesnt matter if they dont follow the ( ... )

mija711 August 21 2005, 12:12:29 UTC

ooh almost forgot, that happens when I babble, sadly, anyhow, bringing in the Furher was a good touch, Greed did say he had no idea where his so called sibblings were nor did he care to find out, now Bradly knows, and that means so will the others, which leads me to believe that not only will Greed have to deal with the military but with the Sins tring to kill or capture his happy little greedy self..lol..besides Im sure once the rest of the sins find out about the Elrics they might want them to themselves which raises a bunch of new questions, but really, I know Roy is hurt and humiliated and all that stuff, but he shouldnt hate Al and Ed, Ed tried to warn him, and Al tried to help him, it really isnt their fault, Roys DIDNT have to go on that mission for Hughes, and really, the boys need help, so why not ask for it, Roy cant blame them...meanie Roy..but I understand his pain and hatred of them at the moment, but they have been living like that for FIVE gosh darn years, so have Pity on them Roy sweetie..anyhow im done babbling for ( ... )