PETS Chapter 9

[velvet_mace]

Unbeta'd. Rough. This chapter is something of a let down from last one's hotness. I suppose that's just the way fics work. Call this the post orgasmic glow. This is a plot chapter, introducing a lot of new (canon) characters into the mix. And I've done what I've never done before. Written consensual canon sex. Amazing. Enjoy it because it

Comments

[mija711]

omg I have just spent hours reading this fic from chapter one..and it was well worth it...I had not noticed that you were the one who had written pawns or I would have read this sooner, I usually shy away from fics with the sins in pairings or dominant roles, what can I say , it aint my cup of tea, lol but your totally changing my mind on that one, this story is fantastic! and Ive only seen Greed in Episode with Lab 5, but have yet to see the others, well except for Gluttony, Lust, and Envy, and bits of sloth..again this fic totally blew me away, and I find it cute how you are competing with Sky Dark on word count, funny cause you and Skydark are like my favorite authors, both your works are totally wonderful, well written and gut clenching, that nail biting way that you guys have of putting me on edge till the next chapter is up..I was like that with Pawns and Sex-Ed Teacher and now with Pets..lol..yall are thee best..again Velvet you truelly seem to bring charactors to life in a way that it doesnt matter if they dont follow the mango or series, its just that DAMN good, you have talent and I for one Envy you and thank you much for writing these stories for me and of course everyone else to read, stories like yours and Sky's keep me a going. lol, not that I dont adore alot of the fics Ive read here cause I have, there are alot of talented writers out there, but you and Sky just have this wonderfull knack of outdoing yourselves? sorry for mentioning Sky in your review, I just wanted to express how wonderfull you fics are and so are Sky's, althoug in totally diffrent ways? from Pawns to Pets, I have to say you are the AU Queen of FMA in my opinion, your writing makes me believe this is actually happening in the FMA world, its that dang good and believable, ok sorry for my ranting, I get like that after a totally awsome fic or chapter I just adored, ask Sky I think I totally filled her review box with way to lengthy post, but If I recall I did the same for Pawns I totally LOVED!! that fic and was both happy and sad to see it end, happy because it all ended well, sad because it was like loosing a friend sort of, it left me wanting more and missing the charactors, Im sure Pets is going to do the same, please update soon and forgive me for my wierd babbling review, I tend to do that and if it bothers you or anyone else just let me know tell me to stop and I shall leave smaller reviews k?? till next chapter thank you for the totally terrific read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)