PETS Chapter 9

[velvet_mace]

Unbeta'd. Rough. This chapter is something of a let down from last one's hotness. I suppose that's just the way fics work. Call this the post orgasmic glow. This is a plot chapter, introducing a lot of new (canon) characters into the mix. And I've done what I've never done before. Written consensual canon sex. Amazing. Enjoy it because it

Comments

[tir_synni]

^___^ Hughes/Gracia. The only het pairing I really like in that fandom. Lovely.
Hee! They were so close! And you added Archer and Kimbley to the mix! All sorts of fun. ^_~

[velvet_mace]

It was a challenge for me to write het. Now I've proved to myself I can do it, I can go back to what I like best.

[serafinasera]

I never thought about Hughes/Gracia before, it being an actual, real canon pairing, so was hot though! I love their trusting relationship *fuzzy inside*
When Hughes gets down to the raid site will they find Greed's old bondage dungeons and stuff 0_0

[velvet_mace]

hee hee... There's a worrysome thought.

[stickmarionette]

I'm not very coherent right now, so I thought I'd just let you know that I'm on the edge of my seat here XD

Loved the way you wrote Bradley and the inclusion of more characters, and as usual the way you weave the plot in is flawless.

*makes happy noises*

[velvet_mace]

Yea! Yes Bradley is a MAJOR character in this. It was about time he made an appearance.

[cryogenia]

So, you know how I said I wasn't gonna read this fic?

Uh, well, I sort of went back on that ^^;;;

Glad I did, though - as very holy-fucking-hell-this-is-WRONG as it may be, it's actually very interesting. I'm really hoping that Roytachi escape soon, because I feel incredibly sorry for them - and I like how Hughes and Hawkeye are hot on their trail.

More?

[velvet_mace]

I managed to make you read despite yourself. Man I must be good.

No, I'm really happy you are looking at it. I respect you and your writing a lot.

Holy-fucking-hell-this-is-WRONG is right. I'm banging my head around that issue right now. I'm doing Roy x Ed x Al x Greed and holy fuck, humiliation up the yin-yang. It's actually pushing the envelope on what I can stomach.

[elfwhims]

I'm only just now getting around to reading this chapter, but holy cats woman! I found it just as gripping and intense as your other chapters. I love plot, I live for plot (but PWP turns me on too) and this was a great chapter. I love how you show the worry Hughes has for his family (and wooo!! Het sex was great!) and I love how you're intertwining the rest of the characters into the story. It's a wonderful show and I'm completely enjoying myself <3

[velvet_mace]

I'm trying to make this equal parts plot and smut. I like smut stories that have a little something else to them. Something about the way the plot makes the smut more... interesting.