Forbidden: Part 10

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Part 10/? (It's a LONG short story)
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents

Comments

[hurleysunn]

SPOT... MINE, HA! :o)

[vampiremadonna]

Lol. My usual first place spotters aren't going to be very happy with you...

Waaaah~!

[hurleysunn]

Aw. Too bad :o) lol
Dude, am I glad I found you. Seriously! You are a freaking amazing writter. I've only read this story so far, I started tonight & finished tonight, but you're amazing, really. ♡
Now.. I'm so sad for Jae that his sister died & I'm happy that the disgusting Minister Lee is finally dead. But I was getting so worried lol I read your description of the movie a few chapters back & had a friggin fangirl freakout b/c I thought you'd be writing the story the same way. & it seemed like Jaejoong didn't love Yunho so I was going to comment about it, BUT he realized it in this chapter & I'm so happy~!! :o) This story is one of the best stories, fanfiction, YunJae, or novel, I've ever read, & I hope it has a happy ending!! Poor YunJae deserve it!!
& sorry, I guess, to your usual first spotters, but I'm a new reader & they're gona have to battle with me now!!...... *evil vilain laugh*
Yeah, well in a honesty... I was reading & saw that you posted Part 10 up & that it had no comments yet so.... yeah. I snatched it! Me <<<<

Re: Waaaah~!

[rainycakes]

yunho1205 and I will think about it...

kekeke xP

[rainycakes]

SPOT ALSDGKHSLERS >:(

[rainycakes]

HOLY SHIT! THIS CHAPTER WAS SO FREAKIN EPIC!! OMG I didn't have even one moment to breathe once Jae ran off to find the Minister!! Gaaahhh!!!

Holy fudge, there's just too much to say!! I feel so eloquent-less right now! rofl! See?! lskdfslej

*takes a deep breath*

Ok. There was one thing that stuck out to me, probably because it was at the end and my mind can't process all of the other epicness that went on before it!

He hated to part from him now of all times but Jae’s safety was the most pressing matter at the moment, more important than his desire to take him to his chambers and drown in their love for each other.

There's ALWAYS time for smex!!! WTF Yunho! Grab him, take him to your room or make everyone leave so you can take him up against the wall right there in the room with dead bodies, and FUCK HIS BRAINS OUT! Holy crap I felt so overwhelmed in that moment!! I was like, "SJDLFSE Jae! Wtf is wrong with you?! Wae! Wae must you say these things that will turn him on right now when he can't ravage the crap outta

[vampiremadonna]

Say what things, you crazy woman? Jae didn't SAY anything, Yunho thought it. Even with all the death around him, his hormones were still in charge. Remind you of someone? Huh huh huh? ~_^

[rainycakes]

Jae was already on his way out the door before she stopped speaking. He didn’t stop when TaeHun called out to him, his mind fixed determinedly on his destination. He had no weapons; he didn’t need any. He was going to tear the bastard’s heart out with his bare hand. Only when he held the throbbing, blackened mess in his hands would he be satisfied. Then he could grieve for what he’d lost. Then he could follow her into the beyond. But until he’d avenged her, he wouldn’t shed a single tear.

He closed his eyes and thought of JiHye. He was strangely comforted by the thought that he’d be reunited with her soon.

Jae was lost in his own world. He had avenged his sister’s death, he thought with a smile. She could move on peacefully now. And soon, he would join her.Were these not all Jae's thoughts? They weren't Yunho's. I understand the last two were during and after he fought the Minister, so he probably thought he was going to be killed one way or the other, but that first one was before any of that. Though I suppose he already knew he

[chloe1910]

OMG! You really have the bastard castrated! Well, he deserved it anyway and he definitely deserved to die. Jae only killed him out of trying to protect Yunho. If he didn't act fast then, Yunho would have been the one who is going to die instead.

I'm glad that Jaejoong finally realised his feelings for Yunho and confessed to Yunho. Too bad that they can't bask in their love cause Jae has to go into hiding and Yunho has to put his plans into action. I pray for all their safety.

I wonder what was the news that the Queen brought.Doesn't sound liek it's good news >.<; But I'm glad that she's here and she's willing to protect Jaejoong. She's a very honorable person.

[yayauw]

omo...omo..Have I told you that I love you? Two chapters in a day:) Yay!!! Now I'm waiting for Second changes to be updated:)You are now officially listed in one of my fave authors list:)

Will read this chapter as soon as I got home:)Thank youuuuuu

[rainycakes]

You are now officially listed in one of my fave authors list:)

You have one of those, too? kekeke :) Shhh~

[yayauw]

Yup. I have it, hahaha... No kidding. The list is based on the stories' plot as well as the regularity of its update. Two chapters a day was very nice treat. I LOVE IT! thanks vampiremadonna:)

[vampiremadonna]

You're welcome ^^

[lovelysasusaku]

I love this.