Forbidden: Part 10

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Part 10/? (It's a LONG short story)
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents

Comments

[rainycakes]

HOLY SHIT! THIS CHAPTER WAS SO FREAKIN EPIC!! OMG I didn't have even one moment to breathe once Jae ran off to find the Minister!! Gaaahhh!!!

Holy fudge, there's just too much to say!! I feel so eloquent-less right now! rofl! See?! lskdfslej

*takes a deep breath*

Ok. There was one thing that stuck out to me, probably because it was at the end and my mind can't process all of the other epicness that went on before it!

He hated to part from him now of all times but Jae’s safety was the most pressing matter at the moment, more important than his desire to take him to his chambers and drown in their love for each other.

There's ALWAYS time for smex!!! WTF Yunho! Grab him, take him to your room or make everyone leave so you can take him up against the wall right there in the room with dead bodies, and FUCK HIS BRAINS OUT! Holy crap I felt so overwhelmed in that moment!! I was like, "SJDLFSE Jae! Wtf is wrong with you?! Wae! Wae must you say these things that will turn him on right now when he can't ravage the crap outta you for our pervy benefit?!?!" SERIOUSLY. Just. Seriously, Jae. WHAT THE FUCK. I had yet to be disappointed in Jae til now. Ugh. (lolz j/k~ He loves Yunho~ kekeke! Wait, that part of my comment is coming later!)

So now that my smut rant is over...OMG I LOVED THE MINSTER'S PUNISHMENT! Bahahahaha! And I love how Yun's all like, "I know my course is the right one" right before he CHOPS OFF HIS WIENER!! >D That son of a bitch deserved that much and more! Yunho should've chopped it off, made him suck on it, then stuck it up his ass! D< At any rate, I'm glad Jae got his final revenge~ :D Though I'm not liking all of these "I'll join her after" thoughts he keeps having. :( He'd better not try anything stupid! He can't! Not now that he realizes his love for King Yunnie~!

(Commence the previously mentioned part of my comment:)

Waaahh~ I want them to fly away on a cloud of love together~ *spins in her chair as stars and hearts fall all around her* Kyaaa~!! xDDD They can make lots and lots of YunJae babies now~~~ Kyaaaa~ (I know this isn't mpreg. Just ignore the part of your brain that says it isn't possible. xP)

(End ridiculous fangirly spazzing)

Omo! I almost forgot! Because I was flying away in YunJae love land. What did the Queen have to tell Yunnie?! Ugh, I know we are supposed to feel sorry for her and all that jazz, but I still don't like her attitude. I sympathize with her and all, but...ugh. Whatever. She can't ruin the YunJae loooove~~~

KK, I'm done for now. Going to bed. You kept me up by telling me this was ready. You evil, evil little woman! You knew I was going to read it! I'm such a masochist...*shakes head sadly*

Oh yes, pervert #2, out! I can't wait to read my pervy twin's comment~ hehehe!

[vampiremadonna]

Say what things, you crazy woman? Jae didn't SAY anything, Yunho thought it. Even with all the death around him, his hormones were still in charge. Remind you of someone? Huh huh huh? ~_^

[rainycakes]

Jae was already on his way out the door before she stopped speaking. He didn’t stop when TaeHun called out to him, his mind fixed determinedly on his destination. He had no weapons; he didn’t need any. He was going to tear the bastard’s heart out with his bare hand. Only when he held the throbbing, blackened mess in his hands would he be satisfied. Then he could grieve for what he’d lost. Then he could follow her into the beyond. But until he’d avenged her, he wouldn’t shed a single tear.

He closed his eyes and thought of JiHye. He was strangely comforted by the thought that he’d be reunited with her soon.

Jae was lost in his own world. He had avenged his sister’s death, he thought with a smile. She could move on peacefully now. And soon, he would join her.

Were these not all Jae's thoughts? They weren't Yunho's. I understand the last two were during and after he fought the Minister, so he probably thought he was going to be killed one way or the other, but that first one was before any of that. Though I suppose he already knew he'd be killed or something if he took the Minister's life, which was his objective. Either way, it didn't sound good to me. :( I was simply stating that I didn't like how he was so ready to die just because his sister had died. :(

[vampiremadonna]

This is what I was referring to you cray-cray:

There's ALWAYS time for smex!!! WTF Yunho! Grab him, take him to your room or make everyone leave so you can take him up against the wall right there in the room with dead bodies, and FUCK HIS BRAINS OUT! Holy crap I felt so overwhelmed in that moment!! I was like, "SJDLFSE Jae! Wtf is wrong with you?! Wae! Wae must you say these things that will turn him on right now when he can't ravage the crap outta you for our pervy benefit?!?!" SERIOUSLY. Just. Seriously, Jae. WHAT THE FUCK

[rainycakes]

LoL But wtf?! You referred to something randomly! I mistakenly assumed you thought I didn't read the chapter right. >.> *pokes fingers together*

Waaahh I'm not as stupid as you might think! I do all of those awesomely, spastic, fangirly reactions for your benefit! Didn't you know?! HAHAHA

[rainycakes]

P.S.

Remind you of someone? Huh huh huh? ~_^

I don't know what you're talking about...*looks around innocently and whistles* lolz

[vampiremadonna]

And stop hating on the Queen just cuz she has a vajayjay! She's a good woman.

[rainycakes]

It's NOT because she has a vajayjay! Didn't I say that? It's because of her attitude. I just don't like how she acts pissy every time she talks to them. Ugh, whatever. Like I said, it's not like it makes a difference to the YunJae. I'll deal with her pissiness. Bleh. lol

[vampiremadonna]

What pissiness? She didn't do, say or think anything remotely pissy. I think you just hate her for hating her sake. There's no attitude of which you speak. All she did was firstly, make sure Yunho heard her out bcuz what she has to say IS important and couldn't wait and secondly, remind them that they were pressed for time. If one of the guards had done it, I'm sure you wouldn't have said they were being pissy.. >_>

[rainycakes]

LOL! Yes I would've!! So nah! xP

I wasn't referring to just this chapter, though. I just feel like she's been a bit pissier than she needs to be throughout the fic. Sara knows what I'm talking about. I bitched talked to her about it the other night. lol

It really has nothing to do with the fact that she's a female. *rolls eyes* I could care less, really. I already told you I completely understand the situations and the time they are in. And I've agreed that I feel bad for her. None of that, however, has any bearing on why I happen to dislike her attitude. I can feel sorry for someone and still think they're being pissy!

...unless you're Jae. In which case, you are always perfect no matter what you do or say~ kekeke