Title: .what lies between them.
Disclaimer: I don't know any of the people in this story, nor do I know anything about their relationships. This is fiction.
Summary: "Young people do stupid things every day."
Rating: PG-13, situations and language
Archive: just please ask
Feedback: yes, thank you.
Notes: This was partly inspired by comments from
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I like that this touches on the recent discussions on abortion in regard to men who are willing to take equal responsibility for their children. It takes two to make a baby and while abortion is generally considered in reference to a woman's control of her own body, there are other effects of the act such as the loss a father who wants the child might feel. The emotional backlash of having made a choice without proper time or resources to arrive at a well-considered, mature decision is also painfully obvious here. It's very evident that no one gets up and walks away (emotionally speaking) after such an event and the ripples are far-reaching. Another aspect touched on was the emotional complications of threesomes and what can be revealed by couples and what can't--the line She wants to know what he would have done if it had had Chris’s dark hair and not their golden brown. is a stark ( ... )
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Be careful or I might start thinking that you like my fic. ;)
I like that this touches on the recent discussions on abortion in regard to men who are willing to take equal responsibility for their children. It takes two to make a baby and while abortion is generally considered in reference to a woman's control of her own body, there are other effects of the act such as the loss a father who wants the child might feel. The emotional backlash of having made a choice without proper time or resources to arrive at a well-considered, mature decision is also painfully obvious here. It's very evident that no one gets up and walks away (emotionally speaking) after such an event and the ripples are far-reaching. Another aspect touched on was the emotional complications of threesomes and what can be revealed by couples and what can't--the line She wants to know what he would have done if it had had ( ... )
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wow. just. you know. wow. i'm really glad i read this (in a sad, overwhelming way)
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It's still a very sad story, and even though she wants to be with Kevin the tone is that she'd rather be with someone(s) else. This was a great fic :D
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This made me feel all tingly.
She saved the message, listened to it over and over for a month. His voice steadied the unstable beat of her heart.
She still listens to it every time she thinks about doing something stupid.
This too. Britney and Chris. They are my het OTP.
The whole story kinda tore my heart. Really. I love Britney. I think she is dramatic and you captured it well. Good job.
::adds to memories::
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They're heading that way for me. Though, really, I just want to find some good Brit/Chris/Justin fics. Because as a threesome they're so diverse and fascinating. I want fic.
The whole story kinda tore my heart. Really. I love Britney. I think she is dramatic and you captured it well. Good job.
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed and found the characterization on. I was a little worried about that.
::adds to memories::
*glows* Thank you.
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I really do sincerely appreciate the feedback. It means a lot to me.
and now I'm going to go giggle. Because a memory box for a pop princess is a several thousand dollar safe hidden under the carpet. *grins* It is pretty damn Britney, isn't it? ;)
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