Other End

[vail_kagami]

Rating: G
Prompt: #001 - Beginnings
Claim: The Time War
Table: Here
Spoilers: None
Characters: None
Summary: Many a story has started with the same fatal words.

Comments

[quazonic]

In the beginning, there were two boys, and they loved each other like brothers (they say) and swore to never part. (No story starting like this can ever end well.)

So true.

I really liked it! It almost reads like poetry. :)

[vail_kagami]

Thank you very much. It's good to know that even little stories like this sometimes get read.

[nightrider101]

This was great!

I love the style you chose to write this piece. It's original and funny in some places.

In the beginning, it was clear to see who held the moral high-ground. Weren't we just talking about this last night?

This reminds me of your email: In the beginning, the universe was being cared for and watched over. (But it wasn’t worth the effort, really.)

Thank you so much for sharing! You aren't afraid to try new styles, and I commend you for that!

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! This didn't exactly feel like the greatest thing I'd ever written, but I'm happy you liked it!

[nightrider101]

Chances are if you felt it was the greatest thing you'd ever written, it would have received no comments. Why? Because the Universe is a strange place and the fanfic gods hate us!

[vail_kagami]

You know, I think you're right.
Which reminds me: When will the second chapter of your OT3 story be up?