Clumsy hands in a dark room (Damon/Elena)

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Title: clumsy hands in a dark room
Rating: NC17
For: Multi Fandom Comment Fic-a-thon / Icon-a-thon; Here is the repeated image of the lover destroyed. / Crossed out. / Clumsy hands in a dark room. Crossed out. prompted by fluffyfrolicker
Characters/Pairings: Damon/Elena
Warnings: This fic contains Damon.
Wordcount: 400
Summary: “You can't kiss me now,” Damon

Comments

[ever_neutral]

Warnings: This fic contains Damon.

A fair warning.

Damon takes her apart layer after layer, strips off her clothes, her thoughts, all her carefully laid plans.

Beautiful. I just. HE TAKES HER APART LAYER AFTER LAYER.

And the last line is even more perfect than I thought it'd be. UGH. Why would you.

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I knew you'd like the warning, fool.

I regret nothing.

[vergoldung]

OMG OMG OMG

Sometimes Damon tries to be a gentleman, wait for her before he comes, but Elena has a hundred ways to never let it happen. It's better this way: she watches him fall apart, and before he can even recover, she tugs at his shoulder to push him down. She keeps her hand on his head all the time, presses her body to his mouth, not even allowing him to catch a breath. She likes him better when he's breathless.HOW THE FUCK DID THIS HAPPEN? OMFG I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU JUST GAVE THIS TO ME

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LOL, mind-reading indeed! I had no idea you were writing about it, I'm just forever tired with fiction in which both lovers always finish together, because, LOL, real life.

I'm glad I could soothe your frustration a bit :).

[vergoldung]

But it's not just that they don't finish together. She finishes last !!! (And it's still such smooth writing. Not that I'm surprised! But maybe you should give a class is porn writing or something. The world needs that. Badly.)
I still can't believe you'd write something like that when I most needed it. You are beyond amazing. Especially tonight ♥

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LOL. Once upon a time, someone on a forum asked for porn-writing advice, and I was determined to be helpful, so I tried to, you know, give some advice. I ended up creating a set of rules: 1) THINK!; 2) read what you've written. After that, I decided that I just suck at giving any writing advice XD.

[fluffyfrolicker]

BLESS YOU FOR NOT IGNORING MY NEEDINESS AND WRITING THIS.

Sometimes Damon tries to be a gentleman, wait for her before he comes, but Elena has a hundred ways to never let it happen. It's better this way: she watches him fall apart, and before he can even recover, she tugs at his shoulder to push him down. She keeps her hand on his head all the time, presses her body to his mouth, not even allowing him to catch a breath. She likes him better when he's breathless.

THIS is a thing of beauty. A total reversal of any idea of Damon the sex God, and even if he wants to try to be one, it's not as if she'll let him.

When they did this for the first time, Damon still had some shame, they both did, they tried to kiss passionately and pretend they were doing it for pleasure.
GUH.

but she meets his gaze and laughs
She LAUGHS at him.

“I will never leave you,” she tells him to scare him, and it doesn't matter if she's telling the truth, because he believes her, fights her, tries to sink his fangs in her neck, but only ends up baring his own.I

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IT WAS A GOOD PROMPT, AND IT SHOULD FEEL GOOD!

A total reversal of any idea of Damon the sex God, and even if he wants to try to be one, it's not as if she'll let him.

Yeah, well, sex gods are boring ;). It's more fun when they can't keep it cool.

[vergoldung]

Okay so now that I've calmed down a little. Let's have another go.

Once she even broke his wrist to speed up the process.
More. Just more. I will worship dominant, sadistic Elena with my last breath. It's utterly arbitrary and uncalled for and just because she can. And at the core of this game they're playing. What I love the most is that it isn't simply a bad case of anger-managment. Elena is really giving this to Damon. She breaking him, because he craves it. And because this is how she makes sure he will never leave her.

Instead it's Elena who controls both of their bodies, the only thing she can control these days.
But I also love how she does this for herself as well. She needs this control. She needs to do this right because she failed at everything else.

It's funny how once upon a time she used to think he'd be demanding, when all he wants now is to see her naked, to kiss the veins around her eyes, her tense muscles and clenched fists.All he wants is to see her bare and vulnerable (and I think I might die). But he will

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What I love the most is that it isn't simply a bad case of anger-managment. Elena is really giving this to Damon. She breaking him, because he craves it. And because this is how she makes sure he will never leave her.

BREAK MY HEART SOME MORE, WHY WON'T YOU? :((((((((((((

All he wants is to see her bare and vulnerable (and I think I might die).

Indeed :(. All he wants from her is the truth about her. He can love her unconditionally, but he needs her to be real.

We've already established you're my most beloved stalker ♥

[kwritten]

WHAT IS THIS?!!??!?!!?!

[upupa_epops]

Um. I apologize?