Clumsy hands in a dark room (Damon/Elena)

[upupa_epops]

Title: clumsy hands in a dark room
Rating: NC17
For: Multi Fandom Comment Fic-a-thon / Icon-a-thon; Here is the repeated image of the lover destroyed. / Crossed out. / Clumsy hands in a dark room. Crossed out. prompted by fluffyfrolicker
Characters/Pairings: Damon/Elena
Warnings: This fic contains Damon.
Wordcount: 400
Summary: “You can't kiss me now,” Damon

Comments

[vergoldung]

OMG OMG OMG

Sometimes Damon tries to be a gentleman, wait for her before he comes, but Elena has a hundred ways to never let it happen. It's better this way: she watches him fall apart, and before he can even recover, she tugs at his shoulder to push him down. She keeps her hand on his head all the time, presses her body to his mouth, not even allowing him to catch a breath. She likes him better when he's breathless.
HOW THE FUCK DID THIS HAPPEN? OMFG I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU JUST GAVE THIS TO ME.
MIND-MELTING HAPPENED YESTERDAY IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY. AT THE SAME MOMENT I WAS BITCHING ABOUT THE FUCKED-UPNESS OF COME TOGETHER YOU ACTUALLY WRITE ME EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE YOU WITH THE FORCE OF A THOUSAND THUNDERSTORMS BASICALLY. AND YES I JUST SAID SOMETHING THAT CHEESY BUT PLEASE STILL BE IN MY LIFE FOREVER.

I can't even comment on anything else. The fact that you wrote this literally killed my brain. HOW IS THIS REAL?

I knew this fic was good news and to say that I was right is the understatement of the year.

GOD THIS WHOLE THING IS PERFECT AND EVERYTHING I NEEDED AFTER YESTERDAY'S WRITING.
EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED, I TELL YOU.

Bless you and your telepathy ♥

(I really want to dissect your every word and cover you in praise and creepy love and all that stuff, but I'm so fucking high on this little miracle that I just CAN'T. Please forgive my temporary inaptitude.)

[upupa_epops]

LOL, mind-reading indeed! I had no idea you were writing about it, I'm just forever tired with fiction in which both lovers always finish together, because, LOL, real life.

I'm glad I could soothe your frustration a bit :).

[vergoldung]

But it's not just that they don't finish together. She finishes last !!! (And it's still such smooth writing. Not that I'm surprised! But maybe you should give a class is porn writing or something. The world needs that. Badly.)
I still can't believe you'd write something like that when I most needed it. You are beyond amazing. Especially tonight ♥

[upupa_epops]

LOL. Once upon a time, someone on a forum asked for porn-writing advice, and I was determined to be helpful, so I tried to, you know, give some advice. I ended up creating a set of rules: 1) THINK!; 2) read what you've written. After that, I decided that I just suck at giving any writing advice XD.