Only dead girls don't walk away from me, as sad as it seems

[uninformed]

title: Flawed
fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
pairing: Elricest
genre: angst, incest, yaoi
spoilers: eps 51
words: 286
warnings: I don't believe in grammar. No, really. Spur of the moment and random, but I kinda like it.
R

Comments

[feast]

Aww, Ed-ward. *pats*

I really liked this, especially the style you wrote it in: lyrical and panicky, obviously like Ed is.

♥♥♥ You've won my morning!

[uninformed]

Whee, I won your morning! I win!

I'm glad you liked it - I was worried it was just random weirdness escaping my brain that didn't actually make any sense. Perhaps I will post it to Elricest... *is a posting in comms wuss*

[feast]

You can do it! I believe in you! *brave face*

[chrstphrl]

This is beautiful just beautiful.

[uninformed]

Thank you! ^_^

[ecclecticdreams]

Oh the style was fabulous! I agree completely with xkchanx, lyrical and panicky describes it perfectly.

*two thumbs way way up*

[uninformed]

wow, thank you - I'm glad that you liked it!

[kyuri]

Oooo, I'm glad you posted it to the comm ^o^

I loved it--short, bittersweet, and much too sensual *heart* I must say, the idea itself is cliche, but you did a great job with it.

P.S. I love the lack of proper grammar XD Gives it a wonderful feel. Flow of consciousness writing is it? *Forgets these things*

[uninformed]

the clicheness is part of the reason I wasn't sure I wanted to post it -_-;;

Thank you very much ^_^ I'm glad you liked it (and my improper use of grammar)!

[liete]

Oh god, Ed. Get over it. *fwaps him*

Nice job, though. I enjoyed it. =)

[uninformed]

thank you ^_^ Ed needed that.