distilled spirits

[unactivist]

distilled spirits

If I Had My Life to Live Over

(I would maybe hold you a little closer)

You’ve always found it unfair how he can simply sit down one night and tweak, turn, scribble, bruise, and come out the next morning with a masterpiece smudged all over his hands. And, you’re left to congratulate with wide open eyes and

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[kwonjiyongvips]

OH MY GOD. I HAVE NO WORDS FOR THIS.

[unactivist]

:D thank you for reading. ♥

[ninja_starshine]

oh god.

this is so fucking good. seriously. i want to quote so many lines but i don't know where to start because my head is all over the place from your amazing writing. but i will attempt to compose myself:

He reaches out to ruffle your hair and you see nostalgia in his eyes like he’s wondering when you grew up and why he wasn’t there to help you on the way.

You think he’s crying, but Choi Seunghyun rarely cries and no one ever cries over you anyway.

You wonder if Seunghyun fell for that voice before those lips, because that’s the exact order you did.

You wouldn’t have stood so close to Kwon Ji Yong.

those lines are gold. ♥ i kind of want to give you a virtual standing ovation now.

[unactivist]

/ohmygosh dying.

thank you from the bottom of my heart because i adore your writing and you saying this is just a million little hearts. ♥

[oxygenlove]

a lot of really nice lines :) the beginning was wonderful.
the first paragraph really got me.

You’ve always found it unfair how he can simply sit down one night and tweak, turn, scribble, bruise, and come out the next morning with a masterpiece smudged all over his hands. And, you’re left to congratulate with wide open eyes and hands threading all over his genius as if it might rub off on you. You can’t even be mad because he’s giving you more parts than last time. So, you say, “I love it, hyung,” and his half awake smile makes it all worth it.

We all know how real this is. This part is pure genius.

i'll be honest and say i skipped the gtop parts. sorry.

[unactivist]

why thank you so much, but far from genius.

/random rant. i was a little nervous about it being 2nd person pov so thank you so much for being so kind. ♥♥

lol, so say the rest of my gri friends. haha. i'm a bigger fan of tabiri myself, ngl.

[papersanguine]

That was so involved it was beautiful. I love how you described Ri's thoughts and the slow realizations he comes to. It was really well thought out and ordered. You are a beautiful writer!

[unactivist]

oh thank you so much for reading, dear. ♥♥

[lacegloves]

I read this. And it was good. :|
In this achy, empty, makes me sad way.

[unactivist]

don't be achy or sad. :(
♥

[lacegloves]

;;
I read a lot of angst fic this mornin'.