distilled spirits

May 25, 2010 23:22

distilled spirits

If I Had My Life to Live Over

(I would maybe hold you a little closer)

You’ve always found it unfair how he can simply sit down one night and tweak, turn, scribble, bruise, and come out the next morning with a masterpiece smudged all over his hands. And, you’re left to congratulate with wide open eyes and ( Read more... )

b: big bang, r: pg-13, p: ji yong/seungri, g: angst

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tees2mai May 26 2010, 06:12:53 UTC
You write Seungri so well. I dislike GTop but it worked in the story so I will not hate you for sneaking it in.

I love Seungri's way of escaping Jiyong and how Youngbae is the one he escapes to. He's Seungri's safety net and always will be ♥.

If you had your life to live over, you think you wouldn’t have gotten into the entertainment business to begin with. You would have stuck to your first band that had scrawny boys and not one heartbreak. You wouldn’t have gone to those auditions and dared to dream bigger than your voice.
Gorgeous. I love your Seungri.

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unactivist May 27 2010, 00:40:37 UTC
THANK YOU. really, writing seungri well is one thing i've always wanted to do because he deserves that sort of thing.

/clings incessantly

♥♥

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peligr0 May 26 2010, 07:00:43 UTC
You say okay by wrapping your leg around his waist. He says thank you by gripping your thigh and making your hips create painful friction. And, later, letting him make love to you is your way of saying anytime.
^ <3

your writing is always lovely micky. and i noticed that you wrote this in 2nd person i love! hehe and the gtop, i think i saw it as more of tabiri idek.

and this is my fave part,

He sighs impatiently and holds your face in his hands. “So like I would die for you. I would kill for you. And, if you ever loved anyone else, I would kill them. And, you.”
the last part is <3. the possessive jiyong, his fear of losing ri and the way seungri played it off in his own maknae way saying that he loves himself.

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unactivist May 27 2010, 00:41:31 UTC
why thank you masaya! \o/ rofl, you would see tabiri. haha.

possessive!jiyong = best thing ever. trufax.

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eyzel May 26 2010, 08:28:13 UTC
Beautiful.

I was sad all along while reading this. And I was crying. Why so angsty?

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unactivist May 27 2010, 00:42:30 UTC
oh don't cry! D:

there was a happy ending... or at least i think there was. :3

thank you for reading. ♥ angst is my forever genre so yes. forever. /makes no sense

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stupidefleurk May 26 2010, 09:10:51 UTC
O GAWD !ANGST FOREVER XD
"His eyes are weird, you decide when you catch him looking at you like he’s a little thirsty." It's a perfect description <3 that's how I see Jiyong.

The last part is gorgeous ,it deserves to be reread several times .

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unactivist May 27 2010, 00:42:51 UTC
IFKR :D

thank you, thank you dear. ♥

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blushemphasises May 26 2010, 12:07:43 UTC
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omg that was just- Ide...

ok. I havent read anything that hit me right there and leave me speechless for the next ten minutes, in a long time. I just.. thank you for writing this ♥ This is the true gri angst that is rare to find, but that's okay since it's so much more special once I finally read something like this.

As you can see, I am totally in love with this. You, woman, have a certain way of weaving words together and make them seem like beautiful little tiles a part of an amazing mosaic. So many aspects of this fic that I like, I'm not even going to begin the quoting. I'm just going to say I love you for writing this and that I am undeniabley a lucky husband ♥

+memories

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unactivist May 27 2010, 00:44:18 UTC
you are such a lovely husband, this you must know. lol, i like how we keep changing gender roles every time we talk. :| we are so much win as a couple, like for real.

/makes you food and keeps you warm.

♥ i love you for reading darling.

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blushemphasises May 27 2010, 06:39:50 UTC
lol yes, I am completely befuddled and confused myself, but I like calling you wifey so there. Let's always be like this and never change <3

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unactivist May 27 2010, 16:36:48 UTC
haha. never ever, baby. ♥

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