[fic] Shimmering Blue (chapter 9)

[umeboshi_heart]

Title: Shimmering Blue
Pairing: Jaemin (main)
Genre: AU, supernatural/fantasy/non-human, angst, romance
Warning: underage-went-wrong, WTFs, minor torture/violence, possible annoying!min, angst and sap
Rating: PG-NC-17/R
Summary:
Until some springs ago he still enjoyed being enveloped by the current or

Comments

[chishionohana]

*sniff* this is a mix of cute, romantic and heartbreaking-ly beautiful. How do you do it? I ask you, how do you do it?! But I was kinda... dissecting this chapter and then got distracted which may be the reason I took so long to read it coz when I was reading it there was only two comments, so

[umeboshi_heart]

hahaha nooo I love long comments and some reader friends here like to write random long and incoherent comments (with cursing me inbetween)

I think min is younger too (his body) though no one knows for sure xD and there's no mystery in this story, some unrevealed fact yeah, but nothing mysterious... oh if only I'm more mischievous xD

*hands you magnifier loop* xD

[chishionohana]

ah, then I'll try and write you more long comments then

well it's gotta be a mystery, if YOU don't know... seeing as you're.. you know, the author?

no mystery, nothing that I need to find

*takes magnifier loop* why thank you

a lovely scene

[choclavenderjm]

kisses you for being patient with us and giving us lovely details for the innocent boys. love how you playfully give very imaginative details of each character's feelings. love ya!

but i still cry....huhuhuhu....more jaemin scenes please. can't get enough of them.

Re: a lovely scene

[umeboshi_heart]

hahaha it's you who is being patient, still reading this fic! xD Glad you like this fic!
I haven't read the one you send me btw, ive got a feeling I should use concentration to read that xD and I haven't found quiet time, kids are everywhere since it's holiday and such T_T I'll read it soon! xD

Re: a lovely scene

[choclavenderjm]

its okay my dear...we are both patient here and we reap good harvests..good carrots and lots of lollipops...yumyum,,*wink wink*

[kurogoma]

the sad thing is that, if and when changmin disappears...it's not like jaejoong did anything wrong that he had to grovel, and then changmin will come back happyeverafter.

it's just really really heartbreaking that changmin had to keep secrets because something tells me that if he does break and tell jaejoong everything even his true identity....jae would understand.

[umeboshi_heart]

yeah, I think jae didn't deserve the grovel/the suffering, and that's also one thing that made min felt guilty :(

min is too afraid for now... :(

[umeboshi_heart]

WHY!!??? THIS SUPPOSED TO BE A HAPPY CHAPTER!! XD

yes yes even in real dbsk I miss innocent snarky maknae min T_T

oohhh glad you like it, I still hope I can write smut better and better... like... the beautifully hot type xD Too bad my english is limited pih

LOVEY DOVEEEYYYYY xD

[jaesmintea]

Why am I always late? >.<
Will be back with my comment.

[jaesmintea]

Bittersweet chapter

[umeboshi_heart]

lol!!! Yes, he mentioned donghae wasn't he?? But honestly, I forgot because in the last time I just typed the name randomly (automatic fingers) --> can't help it, I love donghae xDDD So let's just pretend that it's the different Donghae.
.......... or to avoid confusion, I've changed the name in the 2nd Donghae to Wooyoung yaayy! I've never used 2pm kids!!
God Im so useless I should kill myself ............
But that means........... OMO YOU REMEMBER MY FIC THAT MUCH!!! *is touched*
and Xiah fucked anyone, not just creature like Min, human, fox, just random, and he wasn't always rude like that, just according to his mood xD

I'm glad you like this chapter, and forgive my useless forgetful braiinnnnn xDD
I LOVE YOU AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE WONDERFUL COMMENT!! xD

[jaesmintea]

Haha.. I like Donghae too and Yesung, Kyuhyun and Kibum, ehm Leeteuk oppa could be so adorable too *grins*

Yeah you can put Taecyeon *is biased* in your fic *winks*
Wooyoung also cute, aish I'm this weak when it comes to handsome dude, I just like them all hehehe...

Omona NOOOOOOOOO!!! You cannot kill yourself, I'll protect my favorite author from her attempt to hurt herself wkwkwk..
Yeah I remember all of your writings. It's been a quite some time since I read stories that could effect my brain system but yet I still can't figure you out. Not being cocky here but I usually can predict the plot of a story but not with yours. You are so unpredictable and that what makes you and your writings beautiful.

Hehehe Xiah fucked anyone!? *raise hand* dang I'm that slutty but please I bet everybody wants to taste that duck-butt (or fox-butt in this story o.O) *smirk*

Geez your brain is just fine! ^^
*smooches*

<333