I feel bad including Unai 'cause it's kinda creepy, you know, knowing of his existence, but it seems like Carlota's fair game in fic, so I was like jfhdnkjn. Unai, then. He plays for some shit team. He's famous enough.
is it weird that the picture of unai was more of a turn-on than the gay porn? THIS FIC IS GOING TO BE THE DEATH OF ME JSYK
god in heaven, cesc. i love love love some of the bird imagery you use to describe him, it's like i'm drawn to the bones in his wrist and the snappability of his neck. i have to reread everything twice, the first time for the porn plot and the second time to marvel at your craftsmanship. also, ON THE DEATH OF A PET SPARROW. i went and read it and what i can't even. in high school when my friends complained about translating cicero or something i was like hahaha lmao why didn't you take spanish like sensible people, and now i'm like hahahaha i'm such a plebe i will never understand the epicness of studying classics. it's just. you make it so much a part of who iker is
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Oh, God. Ohgod. I swear I was thinking about this story earlier today, when I was half asleep on the couch. When I got up and saw that it was updated I practically leaped out of my chair. I've read it four times already.
First of all, I don't know what it is about this story in particular, but I can picture the sex scenes perfectly. I don't mean just what they're doing, but the way you write these two, I can't picture anyone else. I'm not sure I'm making sense. It's like, in most stories, you could pretty much insert any old character and it would work, you can picture any old person in your head doing the same thing, or the mental image is a bit fuzzy...but THIS, this story, the mental image is so clear and so THEM...gah. I wish I could explain myself better. It's just amazing. It's incredibly hot too, but you know that. ;)
THIS: "Okay," he hears himself say. He isn't sure if he's asking or reassuring or acknowledging or-something
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OH GOD that first one, that's how I picture his hair too, exactly. But I mean, all of the pictures,they're pretty much all the ones I looked at when I was reading, or similar(I always look for photos when I write, and usually when I read). The huge jersey thing, I'm glad I'm not the only one who has noticed that.
The Iker photos are PERFECT. I'm saving them. These are the ones I've been looking at. For some reason I can't ever seem to compile as many Iker photos when I write/read him either, and I also find him the most attractive (honestly, I have the biggest fangirl idiot crush on him it's not even funny). I wonder why that is.
Oh *gulps* I love you and I love this fic and I love this universe so much omg <3 You've gotten me addicted to this <333 I'm literally checking my friends page like five times everyday just to see if this has been updated *__
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There's nothing extraordinary about the characters or the story itself
I live in constant fear of the day when people realize that nothing really ever happens in this fic and are like OKAY THIS IS THE 344534899TH UPDATE AND THEY'RE. LOUNGING AROUND THE ROOM. AGAIN. THAT'S REAL NICE.
I have never seen premature ejaculation written in a fic ever before.
I feel like with Cesc, it's like, he's messed around with guys and girls his own age before, and it was fine. But then Iker's good at sex and he's also stronger and older and dominant all this shit that Cesc is way into but hasn't crystallized as stuff he's into in his mind yet, and it's like. Cesc and his boner doesn't stand a chance, ahah.
Ricky's Kaká right?
Yes! I have such a weakness for Kaka. This is like the most condescending-sounding thing to say about anyone ever: but he is such a dear. I love him.
my mom just happened to walk by when I clicked on that picture. Fmlomggggg nuoooh. Originally it was just "Exhibit A" then I edited and put the "NSFW" thing in there because
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I didn't mean it like that, like it's boring or anything! :( I love this so much! And you know what?
I live in constant fear of the day when people realize that nothing really ever happens in this fic But nothing major happens in real life either (well, at least not in mine) so that's probably why I'm so madly in love with this :D It's nice to read about something that's actually believable and could happen in real life :D
And I of course did not notice that warning lmao xD but she was apparently cool with it, because she knows about me reading slash and stuff ~
Also YOUR MOM SOUNDS LIKE A BOSS. I will never forget the day I found out that my dad had some weird program installed that logged all websites visited ever. And the conversation that ensued. I think I actually straight-up I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT'd. When clearly, it had to be me. I was just like UH NO THERE MUST BE SOME MISTAKE HAHA. GAY PORN ABOUT ANIME PEOPLE. I DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU GOT THAT IDEA. I think it had, like, suicide and underageness and all this horrible stuff in it. Oh god, traumatic memories. Mmy dad's such a saint.
I feel really bad about lying, now. It's probably best to own that shit.
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I'm blushing too much... Just wanted to say.... Damn!!! <3
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this is so nicely written like. damn.
i wanna know what unai said to cesc!!! i hope you write more soon ahhhhhhhhhh.
also HAHAHAHAHHA i love unai haha except the fact that he's a "cule" HAHAHHA.
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nnnng unai
Thank you. ♥
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god in heaven, cesc. i love love love some of the bird imagery you use to describe him, it's like i'm drawn to the bones in his wrist and the snappability of his neck. i have to reread everything twice, the first time for the porn plot and the second time to marvel at your craftsmanship. also, ON THE DEATH OF A PET SPARROW. i went and read it and what i can't even. in high school when my friends complained about translating cicero or something i was like hahaha lmao why didn't you take spanish like sensible people, and now i'm like hahahaha i'm such a plebe i will never understand the epicness of studying classics. it's just. you make it so much a part of who iker is ( ... )
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i'm drawn to the bones in his wrist and the snappability of his neck
Murr, yes. I'm so crazy for Cesc in this pic. It's basically what inspired all of his characterization ever in this fic.
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First of all, I don't know what it is about this story in particular, but I can picture the sex scenes perfectly. I don't mean just what they're doing, but the way you write these two, I can't picture anyone else. I'm not sure I'm making sense. It's like, in most stories, you could pretty much insert any old character and it would work, you can picture any old person in your head doing the same thing, or the mental image is a bit fuzzy...but THIS, this story, the mental image is so clear and so THEM...gah. I wish I could explain myself better. It's just amazing. It's incredibly hot too, but you know that. ;)
THIS: "Okay," he hears himself say. He isn't sure if he's asking or reassuring or acknowledging or-something ( ... )
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...So I am just gonna dump all the pictures I look at when I'm writing this fic, okay.
this might be the biggest one, besides the one i posted in the comment above this one:
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The Iker photos are PERFECT. I'm saving them. These are the ones I've been looking at. For some reason I can't ever seem to compile as many Iker photos when I write/read him either, and I also find him the most attractive (honestly, I have the biggest fangirl idiot crush on him it's not even funny). I wonder why that is.
http://tinypic.com/r/mtnq8i/7
http://tinypic.com/r/rjoyvp/7
http://tinypic.com/r/2ewczo3/7
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I live in constant fear of the day when people realize that nothing really ever happens in this fic and are like OKAY THIS IS THE 344534899TH UPDATE AND THEY'RE. LOUNGING AROUND THE ROOM. AGAIN. THAT'S REAL NICE.
I have never seen premature ejaculation written in a fic ever before.
I feel like with Cesc, it's like, he's messed around with guys and girls his own age before, and it was fine. But then Iker's good at sex and he's also stronger and older and dominant all this shit that Cesc is way into but hasn't crystallized as stuff he's into in his mind yet, and it's like. Cesc and his boner doesn't stand a chance, ahah.
Ricky's Kaká right?
Yes! I have such a weakness for Kaka. This is like the most condescending-sounding thing to say about anyone ever: but he is such a dear. I love him.
my mom just happened to walk by when I clicked on that picture. Fmlomggggg nuoooh. Originally it was just "Exhibit A" then I edited and put the "NSFW" thing in there because ( ... )
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I live in constant fear of the day when people realize that nothing really ever happens in this fic
But nothing major happens in real life either (well, at least not in mine) so that's probably why I'm so madly in love with this :D It's nice to read about something that's actually believable and could happen in real life :D
And I of course did not notice that warning lmao xD but she was apparently cool with it, because she knows about me reading slash and stuff ~
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Also YOUR MOM SOUNDS LIKE A BOSS. I will never forget the day I found out that my dad had some weird program installed that logged all websites visited ever. And the conversation that ensued. I think I actually straight-up I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT'd. When clearly, it had to be me. I was just like UH NO THERE MUST BE SOME MISTAKE HAHA. GAY PORN ABOUT ANIME PEOPLE. I DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU GOT THAT IDEA. I think it had, like, suicide and underageness and all this horrible stuff in it. Oh god, traumatic memories. Mmy dad's such a saint.
I feel really bad about lying, now. It's probably best to own that shit.
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