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[vintage_belle]

Title: Chapter Nine [of fourteen?]
Pairing: one-sided Ohno Satoshi/ Ninomiya Kazunari (Ohmiya), Ohno Satoshi/Saya
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6538
Notes: Chapter nine, minus the eight months of waiting 8D Betaed, as so much of my stuff is, by lady_gemma.

Previous Chapters:
Prologue
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six

Comments

[nicefinalbeam]

I confess, I never got around to reading this story before now and I couldn't tell you why, but I'm really glad I went through it. It's amazing, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I really, really love the way you write Ohno and Nino together. <3

[vintage_belle]

I confess, I never got around to reading this story before now and I couldn't tell you why

Possibly because it's stupidly long? I'm sometimes still surprised that anybody reads this one. XD; Thank you very much for going through with it! I'm glad you're liking it <3

[nicefinalbeam]

Most likely. But not because I don't read lengthy fiction, more because I'm pretty sure you started this story before I was even in Arashi fandom, so I read most of your shorter stuff, kept coming back for new things, and completely forgot about this!

But part of the reason I even started writing fiction myself was because of stories like yours. So I owe you one anyway. :p

Your Ohno is awesome. Seriously. He's an actual human being, not someone just letting Nino do whatever he wants and realizing later that he's in a relationship. Haha. I like when Ohno's not stupid. <3

[vintage_belle]

*laugh* This story is kind of like the imp!verse in the sense that I started writing it with a muuuuuuch shorter series of events in mind - and then it wouldn't stop growing. Not to mention the 8 month break I took >>; I'm not surprised you forgot about it!

Ohno, man. I was afraid of how people would react to him - even for an AU. I know a lot of fandom seems to think that he really is so oblivious that he'd get married and only realize what happened after three weeks. And for the most part I think Ohno's not-paying-attention is adorable, but he's certainly not stupid and in his own way he's a manipulative little thing, so I think he definitely knows what's going on. I needed that part of him for this fic XD;

[rinalin]

Oh. I... I settled down with tea and cookies to read this. Because I love this AU so, so SO much.

I loved seeing Nino push. I loved seeing that fire kindled in him again. YES.

Now the poor beloved is out wandering the streets with the creepy Ueda guy hunting him down and Nakai should just go kick his ass and rescue Toma. And while he's at it, he should take out Saya too.

Then everyone can live happily ever-after with their Pseudo-pets and no one will want for anything ever again.

Except me, for the next part. Cause I don't ever want it to end.

[vintage_belle]

Wow~ I never thought I'd write a fic that merited tea and cookies, and now I feel awesome 8D

Yeah. After getting maiaide's comment on the last chapter I realized that I hadn't really been spending a lot of time on Nino's views at all. I figured it was time to change that.

But don't worry too much about him - he winds up in good company ;) Man. Nakai to the rescue would be the most awesome thing ever XD

Thank you for reading~! <3

[rinalin]

I really, really do have a bit of a thing for Nakai.

He's actually shorter than Nino and Ohno and yet his personality totally makes him seem bigger than life.

I totally adore this AU. Really. It's my most favorite of your work.

[jonna594]

An update! Yay!!! I love this story so much <3

[vintage_belle]

Thank you~!<3

[maiaide]

This was the highlight of my day! It made me feel better when I wish I was dead with cold at work today.

I feel like you've answered a lot of my questions (from the epic one I posted the other day) so I'm glad. :) Nino's gonna get what he wants! But gadflkjdsf damn both of them. I think this is the most articulate Ohno I've ever read and it's so refreshing. I just wish that he would stop thinking with his head and think with his... other head.

[vintage_belle]

Oh good!

I actually had that comment open for a lot of my reworking of this chapter - which is why I didn't answer it directly. I was hoping I'd be able to make the story speak for itself.

Ohno's so in the way of the porn XD But at least he recognizes the attraction now. Things will work out, though. Somehow X3

[maiaide]

Oh, I'm glad. ^^ I was a bit hesitant to send that one in case it came off bitchy or something but I know that's the kind of comment/feedback I would like for my work. This chapter did seem to pick up the pace a little so I hope we'll see some action soon! In more ways than one.

[ktingle]

An update! T^T
My heart is aching for Nino. T^T
Stupid Ohno, I hope he realises what he is missing by turning Nino away. >:(
Looking forward to the next chapter! *Even if it means another 8 months... I'll wait! =)
P/S: Also waiting for imp! Nino ^_^

[vintage_belle]

I know, poor Nino. Ohno will realize, though. He's got people to rub it in 8D
Thanks for reading!