fic: How's the Leg? (Gonzalo Higuaín/Ezequiel Garay, PG-13)

[txorakeriak]

Title: How's The Leg?
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, Real Madrid
Pairing: Gonzalo Higuaín/Ezequiel Garay
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended. This

Comments

[butbyskylight]

I know I already told you this, but - I voted for it.

I love it. I like how Gonzalo seem concerned the entire time but he's really just trying to cover up the fact he wants sex, ha. And I like how Garay can get over his crankiness so quickly if the reasons are right ;)

Good job, and congrats again on second!

[txorakeriak]

I'm so glad you liked this! Poor Gonzalo, he simply can't resist Ezequiel. (Though I can't really blame him for that. XDD)

And I like how Garay can get over his crankiness so quickly if the reasons are right ;)
Well, sex is a great cure for all kinds of things, for instance headaches... XDDD

Thanks again for voting! :D

[victor_reno]

*crazy mode*
i'm not really big fan of those two, but you wrote them sooo nice!!! ^^
very funny and with wit <33333
was glad to read it -___-

[txorakeriak]

Thanks for giving this a chance despite the pairing! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

[victor_reno]

<33333
you really good in writinf <3
thank YOU

[txorakeriak]

You mean, a fic with more than just dialogue? I would have written one if the challenge hadn't been to write dialogue only. I'll write a proper fic again next time. ;) Glad you liked it, though, and yes, sometimes it's great to have a little feel-good fic. :D

(Hahaha, well, Eze might be cranky, but he simply loves Gonzalo too much to hit him. Also, he can't risk Gonzalo getting injured as well, can he? XD)

[just_jenni]

OMG...LOL. This fic is just so priceless. First of all, I find dialogue fics so tremendously difficult to write! But this one seems absolutely effortless. It's brilliant. The dialogue flows, there are no awkward moments or too much of the use of the characters' names to distinguish them (something I am so guilty of).

Gonzalo constantly asking Eze about his leg is hilarious. And I love all of Eze's responses. You picked up so well on his crankiness (which is bound to come out because of the pain, perhaps, as well as not being able to get around and especially not being able to play).

And I love the way he suddenly figures out what Gonzalo is on about:

"Is this about sex?" Hahahaha...I think maybe Raul Albiol's denseness has rubbed off onto Eze! (I mean that with the utmost love & respect for Albi!)

I love the 'surprise' ending too! This whole fic is just so good! XD

[txorakeriak]

LOL! I find dialogue a lot easier to write than narrative, which is why I usually come up with the dialogues first and then spend ages working narrative around it. XDDD How funny!

(When I'm speaking to someone, I hardly ever use their name, so I hardly ever put names in dialogue. But if you think you're overusing the characters' names, honestly, go check out movies and TV-shows. They do it A LOT MORE than you - to a point where the dialogues become horribly forced and unrealistic.)

Glad you enjoyed this story! :D (Hahaha, Raúl Albiol should come with a warning: Can be contagious! XDDDD)

Thanks for the wonderful comment, and for proofreading! *glomps*

[july_v]

I was a bit meeh about this at first and then I cracked up.
They're one hell of a great pairing! :]

[txorakeriak]

LOL, well, I suppose reading fic about someone who's cranky is never really enjoyable, but I'm glad you read on and found it funny at the end. XD Thanks for reading and commenting!